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whats on your mind
what the heck is with that poem you tryed to hide
is somthing wrong
did i say somthing to hurt you
why did you write that stuff
"if somthing happends to you it was an accident
and it wasn't suicide"
you seemed so happy
you seemed so alive
i even said i would marry you
and now all you wanna do is die
i hope it was just a poem
or just all in my mind
cuz you know i won't go though this again
because the last time all i could do is cry
please just try and stay strong
you know just for me
and i promise i'll be here for you
just watch you'll see [comments] => 3 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 71 [informant] => Tiffyo4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

whats on your mind

Contributed by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 11:13:53 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

so whats up
whats on your mind
what the heck is with that poem you tryed to hide
is somthing wrong
did i say somthing to hurt you
why did you write that stuff
"if somthing happends to you it was an accident
and it wasn't suicide"
you seemed so happy
you seemed so alive
i even said i would marry you
and now all you wanna do is die
i hope it was just a poem
or just all in my mind
cuz you know i won't go though this again
because the last time all i could do is cry
please just try and stay strong
you know just for me
and i promise i'll be here for you
just watch you'll see

Copyright Â© Tiffyo4 ... [ 2006-09-09 23:13:53]
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Re: whats on your mind (User Rating: 1 )
by rdv1960 on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:48:41 AM AEST
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Written straight from the heart this one.

Hé Tiffy, you'll find your way, no doubt.

Grtz,
roberto

Re: whats on your mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:31:41 PM AEST
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Good write, I like this one. Can feel your emotion. Good job.

Re: whats on your mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 10:51:46 AM AEST
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i hope every thing is alright

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