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When I get to where I'm going
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 01:20:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When I meet our maker at the pearly gates
Will he greet me in kind or make me wait
Ive lived a life thats full and my past has not been quiet
And because of the things Ive done, I havent tried to hide it
My journeys and my age has given me great wisdom
As though my thoughts have let this moment come
I hope my darlin has seen and knows
Maybe I didnt hold you always. Its you that I chose
If I didnt do well by my children
In my heart youve always been
I have tried to live a fine existence
I took lifes stress with much patience
I hope I will be accepted home
And forgiven for the lands I've roamed
This world has been rough
Most things I have faced have been tough
Ive been a man of means
And when my life convenes
I hope I can get to where I am going
And be forgiven for the seed Im sowing
I am not sorry for the things I have done
And cant look back from where I've run
But I am sorry for those that I have hurt
And hope this brings you some comfort
To know I never meant to hurt you
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Re: When I get to where I'm going
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:51:31 AM AEST
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I liked it. I also like your style at the end of the poem.
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Re: When I get to where I'm going
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by Skillz on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:09:22 AM AEST
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| What a wonderful poem..i think we all can relate |
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Re: When I get to where I'm going
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 06:50:01 PM AEST
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These are golden moments now set in stone.
A very touching write!
U r a good man and great writer.
A masterpeice of wisdom.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Your partener is a very lucky person 'cause u have a beautifull heart and aren't ashamed to lay it out there. |
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