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Array ( [sid] => 125816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In our hearts [time] => 2006-09-16 11:15:06 [hometext] => This poem is all about how mistakes and misunderstandings make room for love getting thrashed and how to avoid it. [bodytext] => Did you see the news for this wonderful day
He`s lost his love and the warmth gone away
Now he will feel colder than the night
Will any rhyme or reasoning make him right

Now he keeps on starring at the wall
And he knows that again I will call
My heart, its in him and he will feel
His heart, its in me and he will steal

He looks on for words to speak to me
Love comes round again, and its he
Something should stir his heart today
He will feel to hold me in his arms in gay

Again he keeps on starring at the wall
And he knows that again I will call
It is all Love, that we wish to deserve
It is all Love, that I wish to preserve

He will neck me and talk to me all night
Praises and accusations, in the candlelight
Mistakes, misreads and stupid human crashes
Doesn`t matter, for our hearts, that never thrashes





[comments] => 5 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 24 [informant] => girish [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
In our hearts

Contributed by girish on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 11:15:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Did you see the news for this wonderful day
He`s lost his love and the warmth gone away
Now he will feel colder than the night
Will any rhyme or reasoning make him right

Now he keeps on starring at the wall
And he knows that again I will call
My heart, its in him and he will feel
His heart, its in me and he will steal

He looks on for words to speak to me
Love comes round again, and its he
Something should stir his heart today
He will feel to hold me in his arms in gay

Again he keeps on starring at the wall
And he knows that again I will call
It is all Love, that we wish to deserve
It is all Love, that I wish to preserve

He will neck me and talk to me all night
Praises and accusations, in the candlelight
Mistakes, misreads and stupid human crashes
Doesn`t matter, for our hearts, that never thrashes









Copyright © girish ... [ 2006-09-16 11:15:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: In our hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 11:56:26 AM AEST
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this has a good flow to it. great write


Re: In our hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:18:25 PM AEST
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Nicely written poem u have here...thanks for sharing


Re: In our hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:20:20 PM AEST
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Even flowing write with such detail in it. I enjoyed this alot.
~Michelle~


Re: In our hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 03:58:09 AM AEST
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the flow works well, i really like this. it conjurs up good images that could potentially have very sad undertones.i like it when i stumble upon talented enough writers to do such things with words.....


Re: In our hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 07:17:00 PM AEST
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Real love really does rock. When you find it you can never let go. When you don't it can even be harder to let go. Thanks for sharing




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