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Array ( [sid] => 125821 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Winds of Change [time] => 2006-09-16 13:51:00 [hometext] => Inspired By ever1der's Poem -Two Shadows- I hope ever1der doesn't mind that I was inspired... Thank you for that [bodytext] =>

When the wind blows through the halls of memories…
And the thoughts billow through the hollow trees…

The minds of all begin to fly…
With the ugliness of the darkened sky…

Where every soul has lost direction…
With every thought losing perception…

The winds of change begin to blow…
And take them towards a better flow…

The shadows struggle to find each other…
To learn and grow with one another…

They wouldn’t see until they tried…
To see each other with open eyes…

Their shadows are two yet one…
They try to hide from the summer sun…

Behind the structures of our mind…
Till their love they one day find…

Please Read ever1der's "Two Shadows" [comments] => 6 [counter] => 311 [topic] => 73 [informant] => oneir8dude [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
Winds of Change

Contributed by oneir8dude on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 01:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract





When the wind blows through the halls of memories…
And the thoughts billow through the hollow trees…

The minds of all begin to fly…
With the ugliness of the darkened sky…

Where every soul has lost direction…
With every thought losing perception…

The winds of change begin to blow…
And take them towards a better flow…

The shadows struggle to find each other…
To learn and grow with one another…

They wouldn’t see until they tried…
To see each other with open eyes…

Their shadows are two yet one…
They try to hide from the summer sun…

Behind the structures of our mind…
Till their love they one day find…

Please Read ever1der's "Two Shadows"




Copyright © oneir8dude ... [ 2006-09-16 13:51:00]
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Re: Winds of Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Boobee on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:18:38 PM AEST
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I like this alot. Thanks for sharing.


Re: Winds of Change (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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awwww...this made me cry. It's not often that a poet hears that he or she has actually inspired another..thank you so much.
I like the pic better than mine..it's' wonderful.


Re: Winds of Change (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:39:21 PM AEST
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A lovely write and I know she is pleased well she just posted but I knew she would be.
The picture brings each word to life.
Thanks for sharing this inspiration

Michelle


Re: Winds of Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:15:58 PM AEST
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ever1der,

The pleasure is all mine... And the thanks goes to you....
I am easily inspired by Great work....

I like your style and the words you use seem like you
gave great thought of them... and they actually rolled
off your mind I am sure....

Thank You

Bill


Re: Winds of Change (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 10:45:24 PM AEST
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Loved the pic, Bill. I can see why Mary could inspire you. She is a wonderful poet. This piece was quite nice. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura


Re: Winds of Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:00:53 AM AEST
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really nice poem :)




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