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Armageddon
Contributed by
InfamousKilljoy
on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 10:07:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Arageddon by Tyler Gardiner
I know that life is done When the dark blots out the sun When the wicked surpass the good When what we do differs from what we should
A barren wasteland has taken place Where I had seen a child's face A face of kindness, joy, and glee A memory swept out to sea
Prior to this ghastly fate There stood structures tall and great Too ignorant to see the trouble Their cities cast into the rubble
Our future here is rather bleak The last life ending with a shriek Their constricted lungs filled with smoke While earth itself, victim of a stroke
Our ashes scorch the ground The tie to life almost unwound The toxin that is man sinks deeper Its now our time to meet the Reaper
Copyright ©
InfamousKilljoy
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2006-09-20 22:07:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Armageddon
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 10:25:32 PM AEST (User
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Well written.
Welcome.
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Re: Armageddon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:41:49 AM AEST (User
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well done on this write
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Re: Armageddon
(User Rating: 1 ) by secretwind on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:49:59 PM AEST (User
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As said before
well done |
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Re: Armageddon
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 03:34:51 PM AEST (User
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This was very well written and I liked how you wrote it... Read smooth and the flow was brillant... Great poem..
Take care
christina |
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