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Array ( [sid] => 126048 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => JUST CANT BREATH [time] => 2006-09-21 16:19:40 [hometext] => We must breath air to sustain life. [bodytext] => That was a big,big sneeze.
Went down on my knees.
NO- they were not just fleas.
Air born dust- flying in the breeze.
Look just like fast flying sparrows.
Polluted air is full of such arrows.
Man on the soapbox talks with rust.
DIRTY AIR-This is a bust!!!!
Lungs need to be cleaned soon.
Catch the loon on the next tune.
Cement mixer is going full blast.
Just-JUMP-it was the last.
Three packs a day is your fill.
NO!! I'LL never get ill-that pill.
MAN ON THE SOAPBOX JUST SAID,
""ACID-RAIN will melt pure lead.""
Melt my lungs before I might die.
FUNNY color skin, rain full of dyes. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 478 [topic] => 21 [informant] => poewhit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

JUST CANT BREATH

Contributed by poewhit on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 04:19:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

That was a big,big sneeze.
Went down on my knees.
NO- they were not just fleas.
Air born dust- flying in the breeze.
Look just like fast flying sparrows.
Polluted air is full of such arrows.
Man on the soapbox talks with rust.
DIRTY AIR-This is a bust!!!!
Lungs need to be cleaned soon.
Catch the loon on the next tune.
Cement mixer is going full blast.
Just-JUMP-it was the last.
Three packs a day is your fill.
NO!! I'LL never get ill-that pill.
MAN ON THE SOAPBOX JUST SAID,
""ACID-RAIN will melt pure lead.""
Melt my lungs before I might die.
FUNNY color skin, rain full of dyes.

Copyright © poewhit ... [ 2006-09-21 16:19:40]
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Re: JUST CANT BREATH (User Rating: 1 )
by LonelyPoet on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 05:34:04 PM AEST
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i like this this

Re: JUST CANT BREATH (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 09:11:03 PM AEST
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Good subject matter, and you have a good rhythm going on.
Peace, Laura

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