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Array ( [sid] => 126091 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no name [time] => 2006-09-22 22:15:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Feeling seem to go in and out
I’m always left in doubt
I want to give up
the pain just shouts
I want to free myself
and take off this mask that you see
and see the face of
the man I hate to be
I’m dying inside
like I got a disease
I hurt myself once
but here I be
all I wanted was
to end the misery
but I wasn’t accept
and death pass me
now it the shame
that eating at me
this is what I hide
but it to overwhelming
as I give life another try
but the scar always there
my heart tales no lies
just a pawn in this game
looking for the prize
but all I find is pain
that I can no longer hide
and if death is the end
why bother to try

god please
help me
as I try to understand why
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 13 [informant] => chaos78 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

no name

Contributed by chaos78 on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 10:15:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Feeling seem to go in and out
I’m always left in doubt
I want to give up
the pain just shouts
I want to free myself
and take off this mask that you see
and see the face of
the man I hate to be
I’m dying inside
like I got a disease
I hurt myself once
but here I be
all I wanted was
to end the misery
but I wasn’t accept
and death pass me
now it the shame
that eating at me
this is what I hide
but it to overwhelming
as I give life another try
but the scar always there
my heart tales no lies
just a pawn in this game
looking for the prize
but all I find is pain
that I can no longer hide
and if death is the end
why bother to try

god please
help me
as I try to understand why

Copyright Â© chaos78 ... [ 2006-09-22 22:15:13]
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Re: no name (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 02:18:14 AM AEST
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life is feeling doubt
un-coorpriated beyound a laugh

shame but a feeling
that eats away at all of us

i tell you life is but a chance
if you don't take it

you just lost
what what god
is trying to teach you

good write

Re: no name (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 02:15:58 PM AEST
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sometimes in life there is no "why" just simply "is". that we may never know the "why", so we need not let finding it consume us and work on accepting it (not liking it but being ok whatever happend now its time to go on) such as the past, the great thing about the past is that its pasted! there is nothing amyone can do about it but learn from it and go on to the future. anyway, about the poem, very well down. wonderful choice of words, great write!

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