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Array ( [sid] => 126167 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unfixable [time] => 2006-09-24 22:49:59 [hometext] => heart broken [bodytext] => In the begining it was alive
I felt it was truley a part of my life

Not controlling how it always felt
Reacting differently in situations it was dealt

Some days warm and cozy
Other days torn and holey

The ride it took me on was crazy
Ups and downs enough to make superman dazy

But all of a sudden it came back to form
My life was calm, like the eye of the storm

Then as soon as she came she left
leaving me standing in a cold sweat

A body with no heart
My life torn apart

I want it back together
Ive tried so hard to make it better

But its tough to do alone
Mending pieces of this broken stone...

...they call my heart. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Beckett0306 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Unfixable

Contributed by Beckett0306 on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In the begining it was alive
I felt it was truley a part of my life

Not controlling how it always felt
Reacting differently in situations it was dealt

Some days warm and cozy
Other days torn and holey

The ride it took me on was crazy
Ups and downs enough to make superman dazy

But all of a sudden it came back to form
My life was calm, like the eye of the storm

Then as soon as she came she left
leaving me standing in a cold sweat

A body with no heart
My life torn apart

I want it back together
Ive tried so hard to make it better

But its tough to do alone
Mending pieces of this broken stone...

...they call my heart.

Copyright © Beckett0306 ... [ 2006-09-24 22:49:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unfixable (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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I felt every word. Good write!

Re: Unfixable (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 01:08:41 PM AEST
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i felt this very deeply but time will fix what was broken...good poem...

Re: Unfixable (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 08:19:36 PM AEST
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Time heals all wounds my friend. I hope that you find that someone special real soon so that you can put all the hurt and pain behind you. A touching, deep and heartfelt write. Keep writing friend for it helps to ease the pain. May things brighten up for you real soon. Take care.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M

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