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Array ( [sid] => 126181 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => its your doing. [time] => 2006-09-25 10:27:10 [hometext] => this poem is not inspired by views or my personal life AT ALL!!! just made it up. [bodytext] => the abuse has left me dead at mind
and as i wach my time fly by
theres nothing i'd like more today
than to watch you slowly die

i think about your every lie
and how stupid each one me feel
with a knife i sit at the edge of my bed
as my visions become real

i stand up and make my way down the hall
and stop outside your door
the door flyes open and i grab you
and toss you to the floor

standing over you and looking down
im smiling and im cooing
"dont look so surprised
its all your doing"

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 59 [informant] => nightwolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

its your doing.

Contributed by nightwolf on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 10:27:10 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

the abuse has left me dead at mind
and as i wach my time fly by
theres nothing i'd like more today
than to watch you slowly die

i think about your every lie
and how stupid each one me feel
with a knife i sit at the edge of my bed
as my visions become real

i stand up and make my way down the hall
and stop outside your door
the door flyes open and i grab you
and toss you to the floor

standing over you and looking down
im smiling and im cooing
"dont look so surprised
its all your doing"

Copyright © nightwolf ... [ 2006-09-25 10:27:10]
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Re: its your doing. (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 08:27:54 PM AEST
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why so much anger
i love it
you did great on this write

Re: its your doing. (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 11:58:00 PM AEST
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"Shivers" Ok, now I sleep with my bedroom door locked! J/K. This was a smooth read and good content. Enjoyed very much. Peace to you.
Thumper ;o)

Re: its your doing. (User Rating: 1 )
by CaptainSpaldo05 on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:28:43 PM AEST
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Trust me...Theres been times where in a relationship I too question this..

But I assume your as level headed as I am, as most are, and take your frustrations out in the poem.

Great write.

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