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Array ( [sid] => 126211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => darlin it aint me [time] => 2006-09-26 06:24:06 [hometext] => this is a poem to a girl who was in love with me but never realized i was the wrong one. please read and comment thank you [bodytext] => leave now from my front door
go at any chosen pace
I'm not what your looking for
you're not in the right place

you're looking for someone
who is always strong
to honor and defend you
even when your wrong

love has made you blind so you nolonger see
your looking for someone but darlin it aint me

you're lookin for a stable man
with a promise to never part
you can't count on on me babe
for i'll only break your heart

walk away from the edge dear
it's safer on the ground
im not what you're looking for
im only what you've found

love has made you blind so you nolonger see
your looking for someone but darlin it ain't me

so leave now from my front door
go at any chosen speed
im not what your lookin for
im just now what you need [comments] => 7 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brave_celt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

darlin it aint me

Contributed by brave_celt on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:24:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

leave now from my front door
go at any chosen pace
I'm not what your looking for
you're not in the right place

you're looking for someone
who is always strong
to honor and defend you
even when your wrong

love has made you blind so you nolonger see
your looking for someone but darlin it aint me

you're lookin for a stable man
with a promise to never part
you can't count on on me babe
for i'll only break your heart

walk away from the edge dear
it's safer on the ground
im not what you're looking for
im only what you've found

love has made you blind so you nolonger see
your looking for someone but darlin it ain't me

so leave now from my front door
go at any chosen speed
im not what your lookin for
im just now what you need

Copyright © brave_celt ... [ 2006-09-26 06:24:06]
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Re: darlin it aint me (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:50:49 AM AEST
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Honesty is the best policy...

Thank You for sharing

Bill

Re: darlin it aint me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 07:13:04 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: darlin it aint me (User Rating: 1 )
by poewhit on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:51:25 AM AEST
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Alot of BOB DYLAN words in that poem.Yet, we are like ships passing in the night. If we set the same tack that is love. Yet we are seperate ships in life.

Re: darlin it aint me (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 09:02:23 AM AEST
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Well, now...you are quickly catching my eye with your poetry. This piece so honest, brutally honest. Enjoyed the read...I am a sucker for capitalization though, with the i's. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura

Re: darlin it aint me (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:09:00 PM AEST
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This is straight forward honesty. Someone once said that to me. You know we are the best of friends now. So all was not lost. My words to him helped.

Don't stay because you promised me,
If its not what you want please say.

You broached a subject a lot of us can identify with, and really made it a work of art. It was a painful and thought provoking to read, A thoughtful but sad poem. Sue x

Re: darlin it aint me (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:11:57 PM AEST
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Made me smile. I appreciate honesty, and you're definately honest here. :o) Actually, this comes out more like song lyrics. Good R&R. Will be reading more of your stuff fer sure! Peace to ya!
Thumper ;o)

Re: darlin it aint me (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 03:20:46 PM AEST
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i've never looked at it in this way...this is very sad and unnerving as well. it's crazy how someone can fall for another so hard and love them so much....but be blind to how the other feels. why do you suppose that happens?

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