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To my Friend Sadaddy
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:53:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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On the day you became a better man
You decided to be the best you can
The world looked great through your glasses of rose
When you saw her smile and her tiny toes
When she began to walk she would stumble
She looked into your eyes and made you crumble
Her first days of school made you scared
Your baby was growing up. You were made aware
Shes still your little girl. You would say
And in your head that way shed stay
She reached preteens and you became a watcher
You were once a boy. That made you wiser
Her teen years became real hard
Your hard work had no reward
She went in a direction you hoped she wouldnt
You tried and tried but she just couldnt
Be who she should be and went the wrong way
And she has left you in a deep hole today
What you need to know my dear friend
That no matter how much knowledge you send
You as a parent send them down the road
And put them in the learning mode
You hope they take the right turn
And not the wrong turn, you deeply yearn
All you can do is your best
And hope she will do the rest
Sometimes it turns out bad
There is no reason to feel sad
You have done the best you can
And hoped she would when off she ran
Its not your fault my dear pal
With a dad like you shell be a good gal
Please dont blame yourself
Copyright ©
oneir8dude
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Re: To my Friend Sadaddy
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 01:10:13 AM AEST
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Oh Sir, you have brought tears to my eyes and joy to my heart knowing that someone out there really understands what I have gone through with our daughter. I truly thank you for this poem you have written I will cherish it and share it with my family. I pray that God brings you many blessings and that you will have peace and joy in your heart. Take care my friend and may you have a blessed day.
Thank you.
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Re: To my Friend Sadaddy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 03:36:43 AM AEST
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Such words of inspiration (and wisdom) can only come from a gentle giant who has walked in the shoes of a "daddy" with his "shoulder to the wheel". This is an awesome write and display of what you are, Bill, and Sadaddy's comment speaks volumes of him ... and you. That prediction of mine will come true for you.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: To my Friend Sadaddy
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by brave_celt on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 05:46:06 AM AEST
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| thanks for comenting on my latest peom. this truly is a great write |
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Re: To my Friend Sadaddy
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 09:59:18 AM AEST
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Awww Bill, Darn you....tear-jerkin man. Your writes are so sincere. So moving. This was very kind and special of you to do. Our children....I remember causing soooo much trouble growing up, now my daughter is 10 and I'm saying OMFG...a teen in such a short time...I hope it all turns out well. Thanks for sharing. (going to get the Kleenex)
Peace, Laura |
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Re: To my Friend Sadaddy
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 05:00:41 PM AEST
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Bill~
Your brought tears to fill my eyes. A touching poem filled with wisdom and heartfelt words. Your beautiful loving heart shines radiantly throughout this wonderful piece of poetry. As I can see from Sadaddy's response that he is thankful and much appreciative for the kind words that you have beautifully penned for him. Wishing you both many bright and blessed days~
take care
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: To my Friend Sadaddy
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 08:58:51 PM AEST
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YOur heart is made of gold. Always reaching out to help. Beautiful poem.
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Re: To my Friend Sadaddy
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 09:29:46 PM AEST
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odd how some things come at just the right time..my grandaughter ran off..she likes it better with someone else and I sit and cry thinking I'm not good enough..great poem.
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Re: To my Friend Sadaddy
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by midian on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 04:39:27 AM AEST
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For you to be able to write this so Wholeheartedly and so sincerly is so selfless and such a nice thing to do, it speaks volumes about you as a person!
I hope sadaddy feels better i'm 19 i have lived much more than i should have for someone my age, and i fear have put my mum through the worst in my childhood, and i don't think kids mean to put thier parents through hell if they do... i think sometimes they are just stuck for a way to communicate, anyway best wishes to sadaddy and Wonderful poem
Midian ~x~
~Before the gates of Heaven & Hell~
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