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trying hard to never mind
push the pins into my heart
and feel my blood stop everytime

Lonely soul
failing fast I never grow
seal the envelope, sad goodbyes
feel the air of silence sound the cries

Lonely soul
trickling tears will never find
a heart I held, I'm lost, I'm blind
all her sighs are winds of time

Suffer me, her love is through
no more hate-filled points of view
Let her fade, her tears have greyed
there's nothing left in there to save
It's not in me, it's not in you
We're only trying to make it through
bleed alone, bleed at will
i knew you well but now i'm ill
leave me here, leaves will fall
memories keep your final call
i love you now, i loved you then
and now it's come to this dead end
buried time, roses wilt
will you empty what once was filled?
i hope we meet, i hope we will
become the love that time can't kill
till then i'll wait, at heaven's gate
and there we'll see who's heart we hate
i miss you... i miss you

dw

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Roses wilt

Contributed by In_a_While on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 10:35:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Lonely soul
trying hard to never mind
push the pins into my heart
and feel my blood stop everytime

Lonely soul
failing fast I never grow
seal the envelope, sad goodbyes
feel the air of silence sound the cries

Lonely soul
trickling tears will never find
a heart I held, I'm lost, I'm blind
all her sighs are winds of time

Suffer me, her love is through
no more hate-filled points of view
Let her fade, her tears have greyed
there's nothing left in there to save
It's not in me, it's not in you
We're only trying to make it through
bleed alone, bleed at will
i knew you well but now i'm ill
leave me here, leaves will fall
memories keep your final call
i love you now, i loved you then
and now it's come to this dead end
buried time, roses wilt
will you empty what once was filled?
i hope we meet, i hope we will
become the love that time can't kill
till then i'll wait, at heaven's gate
and there we'll see who's heart we hate
i miss you... i miss you

dw





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Re: Roses wilt (User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 11:02:18 AM AEST
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I was going to try to pull some lines out of that, and do the ussual, "THAT" line was good stuff. But first of all EVERY line was good, and I so related to the the anguish you expressed there. I don't quite get the ending, but you did the rest so good... Who cares. If they'd let me I'd give you a ten! (But they won't) And I mean that..

Tom w


Re: Roses wilt (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 01:16:15 PM AEST
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A sad and emotional read. So you are willing to wait till eternity. Your words are screaming out pain and suffering, but full of hope also. Enjoyed it very much. Sue x


Re: Roses wilt (User Rating: 1 )
by dollhouse on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 02:24:21 PM AEST
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Great poem. Very heartfelt and down to earth.


Re: Roses wilt (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 04:50:30 PM AEST
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Dearest friend Dwayne~
I have missed you so much my dear friend. I have only been back a day to YPDC. I have missed reading your remarkable work.
This pains my heart and brings a tear to my eye. What you have penned down before us is evidence of a sad, pained and broken heart. I wish I could take away all your pain and bring back to you what your heart sadly yearns for.
A most sad, deep and heartfelt write.
May things work out to the way you want them to my dear friend.
Take care and remember I am only a pm away whenever you need a friend to talk to.
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M


Re: Roses wilt (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 11:45:46 PM AEST
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This almost moved me to tears... It's very powerful. I can't wait to read more like it.

Eternally Punished,
Faust


Re: Roses wilt (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 12:29:33 PM AEST
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This was an amazing piece of work.. I loved every line and how they blended and flowed together perfectly... I can relate to this...

Amazing poem... Brillant..

Take care
christina




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