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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Absolute BLOOM
[time] => 2006-09-29 23:24:46
[hometext] => I don't like the beginning but give it a full read through anyways. Critique Critique Critique!
[bodytext] => I’m breaking down I don’t want to feel I don’t mean to be sad or spiteful But I’m sorry, my eyes view surreal. I can’t dream. I just can’t imagine lately Think of what I lived for before. My thoughts have been pondered My questions have been answered So why do I still wander? Why am I still here? I’ve been down there with you, Your face isn’t the same though. Despite the agony we both felt, Since a long time ago. Unlike me, those bittersweet feelings aren’t still with you. Those shaky words I wrote on the table with chalk Don’t worry, just let me pretend this feel And let me keep my door locked Even if you feel I don’t mean this Let me pretend you care. I don’t feel to draw breath, I don’t dare to dream I don’t try to see the world As if it’s smaller than me So I’m gonna tell you, I don’t deserve to stand My mouth will set off my feet slipping And I will sink under this land. I will throw away that treasure box That’s lost its’ own key I’m flying high outta here Giving over misery. Istepdown [comments] => 2 [counter] => 326 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sally-heart-jack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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