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Take your final savor of my broken will.

The music begins as I take your hand in mine,

And in this dance with demise, the last laugh will be mine.

This loathing for you coursing through my veins,

Fueled by the pretense of affection you called love.

It would have once hurt to know it ended this way,

Accustomed to this pain, I'm now pleasantly numb.

Dip and swish as you drown in my serenade of hate,

Step and sway to the beat of fate's drum,

Desperate eyes flash regret a little too late,

For you can't leave the floor once the dance has begun.

But a tango with vengence doesn't last forever,

My craving for you will soon be contained,

Regretfully yours, as the finish draws closer,

My beloved anathema you will always remain.

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The Dance With Demise

Contributed by AKA_Anonymous on Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 12:37:32 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

You can keep your excuses, I've had my fill.

Take your final savor of my broken will.

The music begins as I take your hand in mine,

And in this dance with demise, the last laugh will be mine.

This loathing for you coursing through my veins,

Fueled by the pretense of affection you called love.

It would have once hurt to know it ended this way,

Accustomed to this pain, I'm now pleasantly numb.

Dip and swish as you drown in my serenade of hate,

Step and sway to the beat of fate's drum,

Desperate eyes flash regret a little too late,

For you can't leave the floor once the dance has begun.

But a tango with vengence doesn't last forever,

My craving for you will soon be contained,

Regretfully yours, as the finish draws closer,

My beloved anathema you will always remain.

Copyright © AKA_Anonymous ... [ 2006-10-06 00:37:32]
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Re: The Dance With Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 01:00:42 AM AEST
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Very nice indeed, that poor guy has no chance. May you find peace and joy within your heart.

sadaddy

Re: The Dance With Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by strawberryshortcake on Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 06:43:11 AM AEST
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i've felt this way before. your use of the dance makes it seem humorous. i like the way you think

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