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Suicide
Contributed by
aloneinthememory
on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 06:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I walk
Im slowly fading
Into the light
My visions blurring
My life is flashing all around me
I can no longer feel the warmth of life
Only the cold stab of death
For the lights just out of my reach
Suicide
My life
Slowly drowning
As I walk
Down the tunnel
Towards the light
Suicide my life is coming
To an end
No more breaths
Shall I take
No more hearts
Will he break
An end to the
Mind numbing
Heart breaking
World crashing
Life shattering
Moments
For me...
Copyright ©
aloneinthememory
... [
2006-10-10 18:13:25]
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Re: Suicide
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:33:24 PM AEST
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Sad write, nicely written but I dont believe in suicide being the answer it is a terrible thing for those of us left behind.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Suicide
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 12:24:09 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem, it's sad. But well written.
Good job.
luvs ya!
~*Jess*~ |
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Re: Suicide
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 07:55:19 AM AEST
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wow that really touched me. Very sad yet beautiful. I love it. Great job.
-Jen |
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Re: Suicide
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 08:24:53 AM AEST
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Well written poem... I liked it...
Take care
christina |
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Re: Suicide
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by Rockalife66 on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 03:23:19 PM AEST
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| Very emotional and sad. But true...I liked it... |
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