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Array ( [sid] => 126884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => secret love [time] => 2006-10-13 19:54:04 [hometext] => I wrote this for a close friend.I know everybody can relate to this in some way.Please comment! [bodytext] => Every day I see you,
I break down and want to cry,
We uesd to be good friedns,
But now were far and wide,

You mean so much to me,
And you will never know,
the fleelings that I have for you,
I can never show,

Im afraid that you will laugh at me,
Afraid that I will cry,
Im afraid that you wont like me back,
And if I tell you,
I will die,

My heart will bleed like an open wound,
And the walls to my soul would fly high,
My heart would become hidden inside,
And for that,
I must continue to live,

You will never know the feelings,
I have locked inside my heart,
I guess Ill keep it in me,
Untill I slowly fall apart. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 333 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BRIDGI [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

secret love

Contributed by BRIDGI on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 07:54:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Every day I see you,
I break down and want to cry,
We uesd to be good friedns,
But now were far and wide,

You mean so much to me,
And you will never know,
the fleelings that I have for you,
I can never show,

Im afraid that you will laugh at me,
Afraid that I will cry,
Im afraid that you wont like me back,
And if I tell you,
I will die,

My heart will bleed like an open wound,
And the walls to my soul would fly high,
My heart would become hidden inside,
And for that,
I must continue to live,

You will never know the feelings,
I have locked inside my heart,
I guess Ill keep it in me,
Untill I slowly fall apart.

Copyright © BRIDGI ... [ 2006-10-13 19:54:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 10:06:59 PM AEST
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Many people go through this - I know I do! I tend to be a bit on the romantic side and fall for a girl for the most abstract reasons. Sometimes it continues to build in me and yeah, gets a lot like what you explained. Still, eventually I see that it can or cannot work and so either follow ir don't follow it up.
As yet I'm a solo bird, with bleeding heart and deeply in love with life... Sigh... lol
Nice write, although it would probably help to check over gramma and spelling. I tend to write my poems in Word which will pick most of it up and then cut-and-paste it.. No biggy though.
Keep up the good work!

- Tim

Re: secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 12:15:10 AM AEST
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Very Nice... You should tell your friend... :D

Thank You

Bill

Re: secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 01:55:33 AM AEST
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It's there but isn't-a feeling you wanna show with a hidden beauty,like that of a rose that is closed!You're tempted to tell,but you're afraid the thorns of being unsure might do you & someone harm if they try touching you in return!! Nicely written,with alot of heart!!!

DAN!!!!

Re: secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 04:14:08 PM AEST
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I don't know your age, or indeed anything about you, but if it's any comfort, the feelings you express are with us all at some point, and if someone does't experiance these feeling, then they have missed out on life, no matter how painful it may be at the time.
You have expressed your emotions well.

Re: secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 02:15:26 PM AEST
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VERY NICE WRITE ..AND I AGREE THAT YOU SHOULD LET THE PERSON KNOW HOW YOU FEEL .... IF NOT YOU MAY LOSE THE ONE TRUE LOVE THAT WAS MENT TO BE

SCOTT

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