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Array ( [sid] => 127063 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => God Save Me [time] => 2006-10-17 16:59:13 [hometext] => Afraid it'd happen to me [bodytext] => I've torn out your heart
But your love won't die
I said it is time to part
'cause of me you'll never reach the sky

Now you're bleeding on the ground
The guilt has gone to my head
I think your love I found
Staring at your empty hospital bed

You've recovered just fine
My love now burns for you
Don't you want to be mine?
Are you saying you don't want to?

I'm not prepared to hate
Why won't you wait for me?
It's like I was the worm or bait
After all that I wanted us to be

Now I'm sitting in the corner
Cutting my wrists

I'm bloody now because of you
I am forced to blame
Even though I know it's untrue
I just need someone to fuel the blame

Cut my wrists a little too deep
Going to God is quite a leap
He caught me as I was falling
I pray to him while bawling

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Amicus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

God Save Me

Contributed by Amicus on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 04:59:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I've torn out your heart
But your love won't die
I said it is time to part
'cause of me you'll never reach the sky

Now you're bleeding on the ground
The guilt has gone to my head
I think your love I found
Staring at your empty hospital bed

You've recovered just fine
My love now burns for you
Don't you want to be mine?
Are you saying you don't want to?

I'm not prepared to hate
Why won't you wait for me?
It's like I was the worm or bait
After all that I wanted us to be

Now I'm sitting in the corner
Cutting my wrists

I'm bloody now because of you
I am forced to blame
Even though I know it's untrue
I just need someone to fuel the blame

Cut my wrists a little too deep
Going to God is quite a leap
He caught me as I was falling
I pray to him while bawling

Copyright © Amicus ... [ 2006-10-17 16:59:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: God Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 06:53:36 PM AEST
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hmm...not bad. i enjoyed it. what do you mean by "afraid it'd happen to me"? maybe thats obvious, but i don't get it : )

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