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Array ( [sid] => 127074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wilodroll and Cohadite [time] => 2006-10-17 22:20:28 [hometext] => this is a project i was sposed to do for my english class, its an attempt to write some kind of jabberwocky poem. the main idea should be understandable, let me know if you have any questions [bodytext] => It was glimy cold Jacember
and the snow was faulting down.
There's a skyway path to chamber
of the colors undefined.

Tempting rainbow filch in colors
luring you to start a mroll.
Once you lay your foot you're swallowed
by husmoreen Wilodroll.

Just keep walking- only option.
Let Wilodroll droool on you.
Feel the shapes of colright smotion
surround you in relor doom.

Look inside those closing windows
to your soul, they're dialosed.
Watchers think you're tired of limbo
of which Wilodroll is composed.

Finally reached the icy medings
with its sklurking Cohadite.
When I tasted suanbing candy
I fell into sicy fight.

Sleeples nights with jalster feelings.
Major brain freeze iced all night.
Soul has died, too late for healings.
Consoured by snowy Cohadite.

Then the one I loved with passion
introduced sly Heroshine.
Motionoric uncompassion;
pitch on silver burns the rhyme.

Leaving snowy land in summer.
Three months drowned in liquid clear.
Dumb decisions become dumber.
Cohadite 's calling. Let me hear!

It was snowful green Octember
when I realized in spite
I was locked in skyway chamber
with Wilodroll and Cohadite.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 66 [informant] => ediii [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Wilodroll and Cohadite

Contributed by ediii on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 10:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

It was glimy cold Jacember
and the snow was faulting down.
There's a skyway path to chamber
of the colors undefined.

Tempting rainbow filch in colors
luring you to start a mroll.
Once you lay your foot you're swallowed
by husmoreen Wilodroll.

Just keep walking- only option.
Let Wilodroll droool on you.
Feel the shapes of colright smotion
surround you in relor doom.

Look inside those closing windows
to your soul, they're dialosed.
Watchers think you're tired of limbo
of which Wilodroll is composed.

Finally reached the icy medings
with its sklurking Cohadite.
When I tasted suanbing candy
I fell into sicy fight.

Sleeples nights with jalster feelings.
Major brain freeze iced all night.
Soul has died, too late for healings.
Consoured by snowy Cohadite.

Then the one I loved with passion
introduced sly Heroshine.
Motionoric uncompassion;
pitch on silver burns the rhyme.

Leaving snowy land in summer.
Three months drowned in liquid clear.
Dumb decisions become dumber.
Cohadite 's calling. Let me hear!

It was snowful green Octember
when I realized in spite
I was locked in skyway chamber
with Wilodroll and Cohadite.

Copyright © ediii ... [ 2006-10-17 22:20:28]
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Re: Wilodroll and Cohadite (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 08:18:03 AM AEST
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edii, that's some psychotropic medication you are on, alright (lol). There is a wonderful lilting. soing-song quality to this, in its complex analysis of temptation and despair. It qualifies for absurdist poetry because it is so damn well constructed and believable, and because it has that chilling dark undercurrent that belies the surface absurdism.

Neologisms aplenty, but it works, it really works. I'm impressed, even though I didn't comprehend it all.

Spike

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