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Array ( [sid] => 127199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Essential Connection [time] => 2006-10-20 23:29:34 [hometext] => Longing for that essential connection from one soul to another... [bodytext] => I wish I could tell you a story,
Talk to you forever,
Stare into your eyes and
Spill into them the contents of my soul.

I wish I could tell you about
All of my wondrous world,
Ignoring all of our flaws, our pasts, our memories.
Just for a night, be two souls neither lost nor searching,
But found within each other.

Even if you wake up the next morning
And can’t recall my name or face,
But remember my story,
I will be satisfied.
I will tell the world I spent a night
With everything I never knew was missing. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 331 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Chamaron [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Essential Connection

Contributed by Chamaron on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 11:29:34 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I wish I could tell you a story,
Talk to you forever,
Stare into your eyes and
Spill into them the contents of my soul.

I wish I could tell you about
All of my wondrous world,
Ignoring all of our flaws, our pasts, our memories.
Just for a night, be two souls neither lost nor searching,
But found within each other.

Even if you wake up the next morning
And can’t recall my name or face,
But remember my story,
I will be satisfied.
I will tell the world I spent a night
With everything I never knew was missing.

Copyright Â© Chamaron ... [ 2006-10-20 23:29:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Essential Connection (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 11:12:18 AM AEST
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this poem is nice. read my poem "You are only for me" that gave me my love`s heart and that had helped an american pair get reunited. many of my other love poems "True Love","Wish to be your wife`s beloved","In our hearts" all convey the seence of love.
girish

Re: Essential Connection (User Rating: 1 )
by gabby521 on Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST
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"be two souls neither lost nor searching,
But found within each other."
I love that line. Good write.

Re: Essential Connection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 07:28:26 AM AEST
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*shakes her head*
That was amazing.

Especially,
"I will tell the world I spent a night
With everything I never knew was missing."

Gosh, that just conjures up so many different feelings they're just all so.. wow!

Such a powerful, powerful ending.

Thankies for sharing this.
*hugglies*

Kat.
(off to re-read, of course)

Re: Essential Connection (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 06:25:31 PM AEST
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Thanks for notifying me, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. Your last 2 verses in your second stanza, in my opinion, were what made your poem shine.
PumpkinPie

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