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Array ( [sid] => 127224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Friend Forever [time] => 2006-10-21 20:25:07 [hometext] => Please Let Me Know What You Think. Thanks [bodytext] => As I stand here just to listen
Life flashes as the snow glistens
I sat where he had lay
I wish he were here today
As I try to find my head
I can see him lying in his bed
Why did this seem so wrong?
Was it my fault he was gone?

As I sit here just to listen
Life flashes as the snow glistens
I thought it was friends for life
Trying to live a long life
Knowing he’s there
But wishing he was here
Still, I try to find my head
As I stand, my body felt heavy like lead
It tried to keep me there

Now, I sit on my bed
Many memories in my head
Memories of us when we were young
Now matter what we did we had fun
That’s why I’m here today
Standing here where he lay
I came here just to listen
No snow, life’s now what glistens

If the saying is “friends for life”
I’m changing it from “friends for life”
To “Friends for life, death, and on”
“Friends Forever”
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 387 [topic] => 16 [informant] => WizKid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Friend Forever

Contributed by WizKid on Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 08:25:07 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

As I stand here just to listen
Life flashes as the snow glistens
I sat where he had lay
I wish he were here today
As I try to find my head
I can see him lying in his bed
Why did this seem so wrong?
Was it my fault he was gone?

As I sit here just to listen
Life flashes as the snow glistens
I thought it was friends for life
Trying to live a long life
Knowing he’s there
But wishing he was here
Still, I try to find my head
As I stand, my body felt heavy like lead
It tried to keep me there

Now, I sit on my bed
Many memories in my head
Memories of us when we were young
Now matter what we did we had fun
That’s why I’m here today
Standing here where he lay
I came here just to listen
No snow, life’s now what glistens

If the saying is “friends for life”
I’m changing it from “friends for life”
To “Friends for life, death, and on”
“Friends Forever”

Copyright Â© WizKid ... [ 2006-10-21 20:25:07]
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Re: Friend Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by spiritwind on Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 08:31:47 PM AEST
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Poem in general is very good.

The last stanza summed it up, friends are forever......

SW

Re: Friend Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 09:20:32 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, great first entry, friends are for life and beyond, my prayers are with you, Take care, valerie

Re: Friend Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 04:19:11 AM AEST
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Your poem seems to have been written with a heavy heart, take time out, then re-write how you feel about it all in a few days and see the difference. This is all too raw at the moment, hope things turn out ok for you.

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