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Array ( [sid] => 127311 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hungunder [time] => 2006-10-23 17:35:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Head feels heavy
Head feels thin
Burning in the fire
Burning off your skin

We can fly around the mountain
We can fly around the sea
I hope you can fly through tomorrow
Right on through with me

I don't want apologies
I don't want dismay
I only want what's easiest
Easy is the only way

I really hope you're well
I can only sit and drown
Drown inside the sorrow
That leaves you with a frown

You
The tattoo on my mind
Moving back and forward
But altogether stuck on rewind

I am the traffic light
Turn from green to red
I hope you're feeling heavy
Just like my awful head

Drink to solve the problem
Drink to save the world
Drink to forget the feeling
Drink to lose the girl

I feel like a disaster
Life goes up in smoke
I feel like the morning after
But no one's laughing at my joke

You send me encouraging thoughts
Feelings that I have feel like there is no end
I don't want your apologies
The bottom of a bottle is my only friend

Goodbye to you my sweetheart
Think I'll catch my buzz
I was waiting for the butterfly
At least, I think I thought I was [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Exodus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Hungunder

Contributed by Exodus on Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 05:35:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Head feels heavy
Head feels thin
Burning in the fire
Burning off your skin

We can fly around the mountain
We can fly around the sea
I hope you can fly through tomorrow
Right on through with me

I don't want apologies
I don't want dismay
I only want what's easiest
Easy is the only way

I really hope you're well
I can only sit and drown
Drown inside the sorrow
That leaves you with a frown

You
The tattoo on my mind
Moving back and forward
But altogether stuck on rewind

I am the traffic light
Turn from green to red
I hope you're feeling heavy
Just like my awful head

Drink to solve the problem
Drink to save the world
Drink to forget the feeling
Drink to lose the girl

I feel like a disaster
Life goes up in smoke
I feel like the morning after
But no one's laughing at my joke

You send me encouraging thoughts
Feelings that I have feel like there is no end
I don't want your apologies
The bottom of a bottle is my only friend

Goodbye to you my sweetheart
Think I'll catch my buzz
I was waiting for the butterfly
At least, I think I thought I was




Copyright © Exodus ... [ 2006-10-23 17:35:55]
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Re: Hungunder (User Rating: 1 )
by RandyBabyx3 on Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 06:10:01 PM AEST
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I like this poem It makes me think. I like the meaning of it though.

RandyBaby


Re: Hungunder (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 12:00:00 PM AEST
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superb!
thanks for sharing...




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