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The kiss i once called mine
you now give to her.
You tole me forever its to bad
that you never could make it
The blade slips across my wrist
The ring you gave me with a promise
that cant last. Sits in the pool
of blood. Its my goodbye
the words you know best.

You always thought that i would
be the one to say goodbye
well now your the reason i will die
you promised me forever and yet
your now with her you told me it was
nothing and i listend but yet now were nothing
because you never loved me.

I sit here crying as the blood
slips from its cuts, i give you
my heart , i just want you to know,
That i am left in the dark. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 13 [informant] => donttrytofixme [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

You

Contributed by donttrytofixme on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The darkeness overwelms me.
The kiss i once called mine
you now give to her.
You tole me forever its to bad
that you never could make it
The blade slips across my wrist
The ring you gave me with a promise
that cant last. Sits in the pool
of blood. Its my goodbye
the words you know best.

You always thought that i would
be the one to say goodbye
well now your the reason i will die
you promised me forever and yet
your now with her you told me it was
nothing and i listend but yet now were nothing
because you never loved me.

I sit here crying as the blood
slips from its cuts, i give you
my heart , i just want you to know,
That i am left in the dark.

Copyright © donttrytofixme ... [ 2006-10-26 16:35:05]
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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:46:25 PM AEST
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well done a nice read

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 08:03:30 PM AEST
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I can really feel the pain in this poem. Its a very good poem and I feel for you.

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 10:00:29 PM AEST
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This is so emotional. Sad to say that
my ex-b/f thought I didn't love him,
but I really did. It makes me sad to
think about it. This is a very nice write.
Keep it up.

~Ravon~

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