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nothing is the same, it can never be,
your stopping me from moving on,
somethings helped me to get strong,

go back in the past, where your mean't to be,

we shared a past together, yes I know,
its over now you hurt me let me go,
cant you see now I'm free,
happiness eluded me,

go back in the past, where your mean't to be,

I told you, you must leave,
I can hardly breath,
its now!!! it has to end,
cant even be your friend,

go back in the past where your mean't to be..

now after many years,
its time to dry my tears,
I'll spread my wings and fly,
be happy till I die,

go back in the past, where your mean't to be.. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 354 [topic] => 52 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Shadow From The Past

Contributed by lillyjane on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 08:46:29 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

A shadow from the past, still you follow me,
nothing is the same, it can never be,
your stopping me from moving on,
somethings helped me to get strong,

go back in the past, where your mean't to be,

we shared a past together, yes I know,
its over now you hurt me let me go,
cant you see now I'm free,
happiness eluded me,

go back in the past, where your mean't to be,

I told you, you must leave,
I can hardly breath,
its now!!! it has to end,
cant even be your friend,

go back in the past where your mean't to be..

now after many years,
its time to dry my tears,
I'll spread my wings and fly,
be happy till I die,

go back in the past, where your mean't to be..

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2006-11-02 08:46:29]
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Re: Shadow From The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 09:50:24 AM AEST
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I wish you well on your journey into a new future, as always, your writing expresses your sentiments admirably.

I've enjoyed your poetry immensely Lillyjane, this one keeps up the high standards you have constantly achieved, long my it continue.

x Justaguy x

Re: Shadow From The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 12:35:47 PM AEST
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Thats the way to go Lillyjane. You have got so much going for you, take that mighty step forward, and you know I will be there if ever you need to talk. Inspiring poem, never look back, go forward in haste. Sue x

Re: Shadow From The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 12:40:59 PM AEST
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I agree, this write is full of sentiment and comes from the core. Its hard to let go of those you love or have loved, no matter what happened. I wish you a fare journey to a beautilful future.

Keep up the great work!

Eddie Dean

Re: Shadow From The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 03:00:31 PM AEST
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May your new journey be paved with rose lil.
Such a heart touching part of your soul you shared with us.

Michelle

Re: Shadow From The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 12:11:31 PM AEST
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easily emotional,
a truly lovely goodbye
i like it a lot
nice work

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