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Array ( [sid] => 127826 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => let it be? [time] => 2006-11-04 16:26:52 [hometext] => bittersweet feelings [bodytext] => everything i spit is damn near a classic,
vintage, yet i still contend that my greatest acheivement,
was my poltical thesis, stolen by the federal agents,
like running a plane through my mind , blood still left on pages,
the pressure, the pain, the anguish, it all collides faster than i could ever
recapture, i can only have faith that my documents are kept secret for a good reason,
if deleted, blood will be lost, yeah over words, cause "Give me Liberty or Give me Freedom",
blade in my palm, analyzing all the obstacles I will across on my path to victory and thus happiness,
without resorting to treason, I want the money the power the women,
this is my life, my career my only option,
from here on out i refuse to work for the man, until i get a few things explained and real things change,
i feel paralyzed immobilized at times stripped of my glory, they say in due time, well due time may come when time has run out on me, i'm done payin dues, come out and give the world the truth, our country is like a diverse Nazi army,
yeah we feel like were better than you,
the powers that be are weakeneing,
creating a power vacuuum and i'll step in to save future generations
or i'll just,
let it be., andf see what happens. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 340 [topic] => 21 [informant] => BSteel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
let it be?

Contributed by BSteel on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 04:26:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



everything i spit is damn near a classic,
vintage, yet i still contend that my greatest acheivement,
was my poltical thesis, stolen by the federal agents,
like running a plane through my mind , blood still left on pages,
the pressure, the pain, the anguish, it all collides faster than i could ever
recapture, i can only have faith that my documents are kept secret for a good reason,
if deleted, blood will be lost, yeah over words, cause "Give me Liberty or Give me Freedom",
blade in my palm, analyzing all the obstacles I will across on my path to victory and thus happiness,
without resorting to treason, I want the money the power the women,
this is my life, my career my only option,
from here on out i refuse to work for the man, until i get a few things explained and real things change,
i feel paralyzed immobilized at times stripped of my glory, they say in due time, well due time may come when time has run out on me, i'm done payin dues, come out and give the world the truth, our country is like a diverse Nazi army,
yeah we feel like were better than you,
the powers that be are weakeneing,
creating a power vacuuum and i'll step in to save future generations
or i'll just,
let it be., andf see what happens.




Copyright © BSteel ... [ 2006-11-04 16:26:52]
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Re: let it be? (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 12:00:06 AM AEST
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nicely done,

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