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Array ( [sid] => 127872 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Snake Bite [time] => 2006-11-05 18:50:49 [hometext] => I would like to put a railroad spike through your forehead with a sledgehammer! (Love Hurts) [bodytext] => Snake bite like a razors edge
Love like a switchblade
I saw rosepetals and kissed you
While you gut me open
But never quite far enough
To really see the inside
Kisses like a knife
Leave a train of blood on my belly
Your sick
I smell the disease you wear like cologne
Of rotting flesh
Heart atrophy
Apathy, *****
Innocense be gone
Washed away with tears
Till all thats left is ugly
Stitches and scabs
You make me so ugly
And I cant forget
The scars you left that spell out your name
I cant forget
Each look in my mirror
I see her
Shes growing out of my back
Like a cancerous tumor
This ugly little present you left me with
Id clip my own wings
If you hadnt torn them off already
Id skin myself alive
If youd left me with any
Id take the knife you ***** me with
And pierce it deep in my heart
If you hadnt already carved it out
If you hadnt ***** ate it..
My blood still stains your lips
The lips that speak with a serpents tongue
Golden lies you speak behind a golden mask
Only my reflection in your eyes
The me that is no longer me
empty, nothing, snake bite
You took everything of me
Left me with nothing, not even an exit
Just the smell of your disease on me
In your wake the reminder of the scars I bare
The serpent in the rose bush
Heart of ash, tears of blood
Leave nothing but the paralysis
A Snake bite in your kiss [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Love_love_kyo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Snake Bite

Contributed by Love_love_kyo on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 06:50:49 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Snake bite like a razors edge
Love like a switchblade
I saw rosepetals and kissed you
While you gut me open
But never quite far enough
To really see the inside
Kisses like a knife
Leave a train of blood on my belly
Your sick
I smell the disease you wear like cologne
Of rotting flesh
Heart atrophy
Apathy, *****
Innocense be gone
Washed away with tears
Till all thats left is ugly
Stitches and scabs
You make me so ugly
And I cant forget
The scars you left that spell out your name
I cant forget
Each look in my mirror
I see her
Shes growing out of my back
Like a cancerous tumor
This ugly little present you left me with
Id clip my own wings
If you hadnt torn them off already
Id skin myself alive
If youd left me with any
Id take the knife you ***** me with
And pierce it deep in my heart
If you hadnt already carved it out
If you hadnt ***** ate it..
My blood still stains your lips
The lips that speak with a serpents tongue
Golden lies you speak behind a golden mask
Only my reflection in your eyes
The me that is no longer me
empty, nothing, snake bite
You took everything of me
Left me with nothing, not even an exit
Just the smell of your disease on me
In your wake the reminder of the scars I bare
The serpent in the rose bush
Heart of ash, tears of blood
Leave nothing but the paralysis
A Snake bite in your kiss




Copyright © Love_love_kyo ... [ 2006-11-05 18:50:49]
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Re: Snake Bite (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 06:53:44 PM AEST
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sounds like your mad, painful read


nice job


Re: Snake Bite (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 07:52:48 PM AEST
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Powerful write and read. I feel your pain.
Peace, Laura


Re: Snake Bite (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 01:08:19 AM AEST
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wowwwww this is raw, wounds wide open. Intense and so painful.

Michelle




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