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Array ( [sid] => 128079 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Borrowed Loved [time] => 2006-11-11 18:49:46 [hometext] => i wrote this poem after i broke up wih my boyfriend. it is one of my favorites. [bodytext] => with my bag of stories
ill repay my borrowed love
thats stronger than a drug addiction
do the cuts on my arms
not prove i still care?
you can hate me
but just know i still love you
the october stars
burn my skin
and you kiss me softly
leaving a scar
never fulley healing
reminding me forever
of what i did to hurt you
a burning passion
leaving an empty hole
in my heart
just for you
you kept me alive
and i killed you
time stands still
hearts are broken and mended
we are loved and hated
on my knees
i dream of death
because of your hate for me
ripping off all my skin
nolonger fake
but still hiding inside
loved by noone
hated by everyone
worshiped by my heart
dead inside
with a cold hard shell
shattered
by the prick of a needle. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 48 [informant] => blindchoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Borrowed Loved

Contributed by blindchoice on Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 06:49:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



with my bag of stories
ill repay my borrowed love
thats stronger than a drug addiction
do the cuts on my arms
not prove i still care?
you can hate me
but just know i still love you
the october stars
burn my skin
and you kiss me softly
leaving a scar
never fulley healing
reminding me forever
of what i did to hurt you
a burning passion
leaving an empty hole
in my heart
just for you
you kept me alive
and i killed you
time stands still
hearts are broken and mended
we are loved and hated
on my knees
i dream of death
because of your hate for me
ripping off all my skin
nolonger fake
but still hiding inside
loved by noone
hated by everyone
worshiped by my heart
dead inside
with a cold hard shell
shattered
by the prick of a needle.




Copyright © blindchoice ... [ 2006-11-11 18:49:46]
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