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Array ( [sid] => 128225 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tonight [time] => 2006-11-14 21:50:55 [hometext] => the *****'s gotten to thick, I got a bottle of pills and a bigger bottle of rum...I'm tired and I'm done [bodytext] => Tonight will be the very last time I cry,
Tonight I’ll make sure to say Goodbye.

Tonight I’ll make sure to tuck the boys in tight,
Tonight will be the last to experience their light.

Tonight will be the final breathe passed,
Tonight will be my absolute last.

Tonight will be my final heartbreak,
Tonight my life I will take.

Tonight will be the last I see,
Tonight will be they’ll see the last of me.

Tonight is the night I’ll finally give in,
Tonight I’ll let temptation win.

Tonight’s kiss will be the last for my boys,
Tonight I’ll end all of the noise.

Tonight I’ll stop all the pain,
Tonight I’ll finally rest my brain.

Tonight will be the end of my fears,
Tonight’s the night I dreamed of for years.

Tonight is when everyone’s problems will be done,
Tonight’s the night I finally come undone.

Tonight the curtain will finally come down,
Tonight’s the last night that I’ll be around.

Tonight I got the courage to finally go,
Tonight should’ve happened long ago.

Tonight I’ll take one last look at their faces,
Tonight will be the last to feel their sweet embraces.

Tonight is finally come and is here,
Tonight I have no more fear…
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Tonight

Contributed by Shadows_In_The_Darkness on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 09:50:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Tonight will be the very last time I cry,
Tonight I’ll make sure to say Goodbye.

Tonight I’ll make sure to tuck the boys in tight,
Tonight will be the last to experience their light.

Tonight will be the final breathe passed,
Tonight will be my absolute last.

Tonight will be my final heartbreak,
Tonight my life I will take.

Tonight will be the last I see,
Tonight will be they’ll see the last of me.

Tonight is the night I’ll finally give in,
Tonight I’ll let temptation win.

Tonight’s kiss will be the last for my boys,
Tonight I’ll end all of the noise.

Tonight I’ll stop all the pain,
Tonight I’ll finally rest my brain.

Tonight will be the end of my fears,
Tonight’s the night I dreamed of for years.

Tonight is when everyone’s problems will be done,
Tonight’s the night I finally come undone.

Tonight the curtain will finally come down,
Tonight’s the last night that I’ll be around.

Tonight I got the courage to finally go,
Tonight should’ve happened long ago.

Tonight I’ll take one last look at their faces,
Tonight will be the last to feel their sweet embraces.

Tonight is finally come and is here,
Tonight I have no more fear…

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Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 12:32:08 AM AEST
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This poem is REALLY powerful and deep. I know how you feel and at times, I wish i could do the same. But Im sure there is one person in this screwed up world that loves you!

Great Job!

Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 08:06:25 AM AEST
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wow...deep write and rather scarey i hope you are not contemplating....i mean yeah life sucks at times but sooner or later it will get better! if you need any help or just someone to listen and to care when it seems no one else does i am a pm away again i hope it was just a really good write..but if its more then that please think a little harder..

Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by spiritwind on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 12:25:26 PM AEST
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I'm not sure if this is just writing for the sake of letting emotions go or if it is serious.
If you have children you need to stay for them.

Life is always hard but tests are what make us stronger. Please reconsider.

SW

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