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[aid] => mick
[title] => I want out
[time] => 2006-11-15 05:44:58
[hometext] => I wrote this when everything went to hell
[bodytext] => Please help me cause I'm falling down The world keeps spinning and I can't get off I've got no one to tell No one to help There's no one here The person who helps is the person who hurts Hope is gone Nothing's left My quest in life is being stopped, halted, blocked My friends have turned I can't express Cause I'll just make it worse I can't go for safety cause safet's aflame My only hope is to let go and get off the crazy place But I hold on and can't let go I'm stuck here with the pain and the false visage I put on becomes more a part of the me you see And I can't get through I'm screaming here but no one can hear me So I'm all alone I'm falling down And no one's here I'm afraid I've got this pain in my gut I can't tell anyone about My fear's enclosing The darkness is here I want out But help's not coming It's up to me But I can't do it I'm too weak I've been working too hard for too long I'm tired as hell I want to sleep but I can't Cause if I do I'll sink further down I'm not okay But I've got to pretend So that it doesn't close in The darkness'll come and block me off Leave me even more alone than before It's something I can't control I can't stop This time alone is causing pain Bringing up dreams Memories that I thought were gone They're coming back Making it worse I want off this world I don't want the pain, the hurt, the sting The sorrow burns My brain's aflame I'm giving into hate cause it's the only thing That'll keep me from sorrow But even that breaks down And I want to cry But I can't Cause that'll let it in It'll take over me And I won't have a chance I'm burning up inside I want to get off Stop this crazy world I'm getting dizzy I'm passing out My brain is burning My heart is bursting I've got to get off If there's anyone out there please help Cause if no one comes There'll be nothing left And I'll just be another victim Of this crazy, dark, spinning world I want off [comments] => 2 [counter] => 288 [topic] => 63 [informant] => CDG [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )
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