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Array ( [sid] => 128277 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => help me move on [time] => 2006-11-15 22:05:26 [hometext] => yep this explains itself....just trying to get over my first love... :( [bodytext] => I wonder why
I just can’t let go
You are apart of me
And I just can’t

There is a yearning inside
For me to just move on
But my heart tells me to stay
And hold on just a little longer

Why do I feel so compelled
To keep my feelings towards you
When I should just
Let go

Please help me move on
To a state where I can be happy
And not worry about you
And about the way I feel

Just shoot me
So I don’t have to feel
All the pain you have cause me
And it will all go away

Your friends joined in the pain
As well as your new fiancée
I never did anything to you
Except care, and love you

I hate it how you are so against me
Only because your girl told you so
Why don’t you just listen to yourself
And ignore everyone else’s words

All I have to say is,
Why be so mean
To someone who only loved you
And cared for you

Help me move on
To someone better
Who will return the niceness
I gave you...

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help me move on

Contributed by forgottenjazzer on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 10:05:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I wonder why
I just can’t let go
You are apart of me
And I just can’t

There is a yearning inside
For me to just move on
But my heart tells me to stay
And hold on just a little longer

Why do I feel so compelled
To keep my feelings towards you
When I should just
Let go

Please help me move on
To a state where I can be happy
And not worry about you
And about the way I feel

Just shoot me
So I don’t have to feel
All the pain you have cause me
And it will all go away

Your friends joined in the pain
As well as your new fiancée
I never did anything to you
Except care, and love you

I hate it how you are so against me
Only because your girl told you so
Why don’t you just listen to yourself
And ignore everyone else’s words

All I have to say is,
Why be so mean
To someone who only loved you
And cared for you

Help me move on
To someone better
Who will return the niceness
I gave you...

Copyright Â© forgottenjazzer ... [ 2006-11-15 22:05:26]
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Re: help me move on (User Rating: 1 )
by myloveispure on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 08:45:06 AM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel but if this girl is that mean dont even bother going for her again,she has hurt you,you deserve better and with your love and compassion you will recieve better.

Re: help me move on (User Rating: 1 )
by kalbime_aldin on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 12:00:07 PM AEST
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i love how you put this down its really good Nikki

Re: help me move on (User Rating: 1 )
by kalbime_aldin on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 12:00:08 PM AEST
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i love how you put this down its really good Nikki

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