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the moonlight is calling
and I'm in the arms of Maria

Quietly dancing
the silence entrancing
I fall to the charms of Maria

Moonbeams and stardust
A passionate kiss just
a moment, one moment away

Whispers and sighs
lost in ebony eyes
To the sound of our heartbeats we sway

Dreams of forever
but knowing there's never
a chance this can last past the night

Still we embrace
and tomorrow we'll face
all the question of what's wrong or right

So for the moment
I'll call this atonement
for wishes that never came true

And relish the chances
for slow midnight dances
alone in the darkness with you

L. Carling c2006

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Midnight With Maria

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 10:14:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Darkness is falling
the moonlight is calling
and I'm in the arms of Maria

Quietly dancing
the silence entrancing
I fall to the charms of Maria

Moonbeams and stardust
A passionate kiss just
a moment, one moment away

Whispers and sighs
lost in ebony eyes
To the sound of our heartbeats we sway

Dreams of forever
but knowing there's never
a chance this can last past the night

Still we embrace
and tomorrow we'll face
all the question of what's wrong or right

So for the moment
I'll call this atonement
for wishes that never came true

And relish the chances
for slow midnight dances
alone in the darkness with you

L. Carling c2006

Copyright Â© Rakerman1999 ... [ 2006-11-15 22:14:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 10:26:11 PM AEST
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beautifully done! i love it

wiz

Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:10:35 PM AEST
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~*Larry*~
Your beautiful words come to live on this page and they dance merrily in my mind. Your work is such a pleasure to read. You can always deliver an enthralling masterpiece to mesmerize your reader any given time. Ascribed to perfection, not that I expected anything less from you my dear fellow poet~ The best of wishes to you dearest Larry~ take care
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:36:51 PM AEST
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(sighs) This could be a song..(sighs again...feels pulse racing.) I haven't logged in for awhile and I'm so glad I did.
my oh my...oh my. (smiles..closes eyes...) I love it..can ya tell? lol

Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:48:57 PM AEST
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You are here wowing us with your work! Yea!
A flowing tempting write, sounds like a great time....

tosses rose petals

michelle

Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 08:43:52 AM AEST
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Very sweet, with a gracefully slow and gentle beauty....sigh...

Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 08:50:38 AM AEST
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Amazing... This was really beautiful... I thought the flow was brillant..

Take care
Christina

Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 06:03:24 PM AEST
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writing is beyond beautiful, and I’m afraid that I’m becoming insanely jealous. Lines such as:
“So for the moment
I'll call this atonement
for wishes that never came true”
seem to stick with me.

Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 6th May 2009 @ 01:06:28 AM AEST
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oops ... already read and commented on this. Still, it's a favorite of mine.

Re: Midnight With Maria (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 26th August 2020 @ 11:33:30 PM AEST
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Magical......

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