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Array ( [sid] => 128298 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gathered Tears [time] => 2006-11-16 09:13:41 [hometext] => havent written for awhile, this is the 2nd and final part to my other poem 'forget to say goodbye' hope you all enjoy [bodytext] => the gathered tears combined,
equalled to a waterfall,
before it began

i was living out of harms way,
portraying cartoon characters with my daddy
and one day he got unhealthy
rushed to the hospital to find out he was dying
of a disease, thats shaky

when it came to an end relatives assembled like a tribe
only as people to show remorse
watery eyes eager to drop
descending down my cheek
diving towards the palms,
to be caught which is our grief

and all i can say is.....
wake up, you cannot go
resting like cannot be disturbed
what to do

you will be missed by the ones who cared
we blew you a kiss, memories seize to exist [comments] => 4 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 32 [informant] => ek_da_poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Gathered Tears

Contributed by ek_da_poet on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:13:41 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

the gathered tears combined,
equalled to a waterfall,
before it began

i was living out of harms way,
portraying cartoon characters with my daddy
and one day he got unhealthy
rushed to the hospital to find out he was dying
of a disease, thats shaky

when it came to an end relatives assembled like a tribe
only as people to show remorse
watery eyes eager to drop
descending down my cheek
diving towards the palms,
to be caught which is our grief

and all i can say is.....
wake up, you cannot go
resting like cannot be disturbed
what to do

you will be missed by the ones who cared
we blew you a kiss, memories seize to exist

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Re: Gathered Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by myloveispure on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:19:40 AM AEST
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amazing write,i know how you feel im losing my mom right now, this is just such a great write!!!!keep it up,i will continue to read your work.
mucho amor,
brittany

Re: Gathered Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by kalbime_aldin on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 10:12:23 AM AEST
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i really like thow you have put the words i cant asy i know how you feel but i know how it is to watch some one you love just walk out of your life like that Nikki

Re: Gathered Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 10:18:03 AM AEST
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This is a good poem, I'm sorry about your dad.
luvs ya
.::Jess::.

Re: Gathered Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 04:44:50 PM AEST
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Another great write! You showed the emotions of the poem well as usual. :)

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