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Array ( [sid] => 12853 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => forgiveness [time] => 2003-02-18 03:30:00 [hometext] => can forgiveness really come after such pain? [bodytext] => You left me alone and in the dark.
You left me here alone and all i have to say is goodbye
I dont ever want to see you again i dont care if all my friends think ill go running back to you but i hope i never see you again in my life.
If i do be sure i wont look at you the same way i could never forgive you for what you have done to me.
The lies you feed to me will leave scars deeper than any that any man or boy ever left before you and will leave after you.
All i wanted was the truth but what did i get...nothing nothing at all just lies and mistrust and you tried to make me feel like it was all my fault like im the evil one.
But guess what you wrong all i did was love you i may have made waves for you but guess what im drowning from the flood you caused.
I dont ever want to see you again because you make me sick you make me feel like im worthless but i know im now now because i see the light and that light is my smile that was burried under all the pain and depression that you kept me in for over a year.
Guess what im back and your gone so good bye and that is for good because i can never forgive you for what you did for if i tried i might cause more pain than before........ill die before i feel that pain again before i ever say i love you to you ever again so take those words and remember that i never want to hear them from your lips again......forgiveness will come to my soul but not to you.....becasue i will never forgive you..never [comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 48 [informant] => tier [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
forgiveness

Contributed by tier on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You left me alone and in the dark.
You left me here alone and all i have to say is goodbye
I dont ever want to see you again i dont care if all my friends think ill go running back to you but i hope i never see you again in my life.
If i do be sure i wont look at you the same way i could never forgive you for what you have done to me.
The lies you feed to me will leave scars deeper than any that any man or boy ever left before you and will leave after you.
All i wanted was the truth but what did i get...nothing nothing at all just lies and mistrust and you tried to make me feel like it was all my fault like im the evil one.
But guess what you wrong all i did was love you i may have made waves for you but guess what im drowning from the flood you caused.
I dont ever want to see you again because you make me sick you make me feel like im worthless but i know im now now because i see the light and that light is my smile that was burried under all the pain and depression that you kept me in for over a year.
Guess what im back and your gone so good bye and that is for good because i can never forgive you for what you did for if i tried i might cause more pain than before........ill die before i feel that pain again before i ever say i love you to you ever again so take those words and remember that i never want to hear them from your lips again......forgiveness will come to my soul but not to you.....becasue i will never forgive you..never




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Re: forgiveness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 04:10:08 AM AEST
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Sad but lovely write, Tier.... Hope you are ok... It was lovely chatting with you...
Jenni


Re: forgiveness (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 05:18:07 AM AEST
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So much pain and so much sadness.. a good write. venkat


Re: forgiveness (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 05:25:55 AM AEST
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this is so sad...


Re: forgiveness (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:37:06 AM AEST
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well done, girl. i like this a lot. keep it up.


Re: forgiveness (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:40:27 PM AEST
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Very strong words tier I love your spirit. One thing I have learned is your can only mend yourself after you have forgiven the person its very hard I know.

Your friend,
Joel




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