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Array ( [sid] => 128548 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hello peace, good bye lonely [time] => 2006-11-22 05:08:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She's asleep
She's in peace
Bleed...bleed... no longer

She doesn't weep
She doesn't feel lonely seep
in through the walls she built only in vain

They still don't bother
turned their backs on her
but this time...she doesn't feel the cold set in

she's asleep
she's in peace
bleed...bleed...no longer

She wrote a poem
She showed it to no one
sick of trying to make them see how it feels to be her, all alone

Oh what a calm in the air tonight
Oh now that everythings in order, and everything is right
She just lies there while they walk over her as they always did

But,
She's asleep
now she's in peace
bleed...bleed...she doesn't have to
She's asleep
She's in peace
bleed...bleed...no longer

I went to visit her today
I brought her flowers and conversation
I ask did " you make it to heaven?" and she said "these things take time and patience"

She said she was finally free
She said she was happy as could be
she said thank you for being the only one who ever noticed me

now,
She's asleep
now she's finally in peace
bleed...bleed...she no longer has the need
She's asleep
she's in peace
finally she's not all alone, finally she found home. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 36 [informant] => girlg0newrong [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Hello peace, good bye lonely

Contributed by girlg0newrong on Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 05:08:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She's asleep
She's in peace
Bleed...bleed... no longer

She doesn't weep
She doesn't feel lonely seep
in through the walls she built only in vain

They still don't bother
turned their backs on her
but this time...she doesn't feel the cold set in

she's asleep
she's in peace
bleed...bleed...no longer

She wrote a poem
She showed it to no one
sick of trying to make them see how it feels to be her, all alone

Oh what a calm in the air tonight
Oh now that everythings in order, and everything is right
She just lies there while they walk over her as they always did

But,
She's asleep
now she's in peace
bleed...bleed...she doesn't have to
She's asleep
She's in peace
bleed...bleed...no longer

I went to visit her today
I brought her flowers and conversation
I ask did " you make it to heaven?" and she said "these things take time and patience"

She said she was finally free
She said she was happy as could be
she said thank you for being the only one who ever noticed me

now,
She's asleep
now she's finally in peace
bleed...bleed...she no longer has the need
She's asleep
she's in peace
finally she's not all alone, finally she found home.

Copyright © girlg0newrong ... [ 2006-11-22 05:08:07]
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Re: Hello peace, good bye lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 10:19:43 AM AEST
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I think that this is a really good poem. Great job, I like it.
luvs ya!
.::Jess::.

Re: Hello peace, good bye lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 10:25:01 AM AEST
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very sad that only in death she can find peace good write thanks 4 sharing

Re: Hello peace, good bye lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 01:50:40 PM AEST
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Though I don't find this topic appealing,, I will say that this is a well constructed and flowing poem.
This does indeed show talent.

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