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Array ( [sid] => 128868 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => NOTHING [time] => 2006-11-30 15:43:01 [hometext] => FOR MY LOVE THAT EXISTS NO MORE ( since you decided to move in w/ that w- - - - ) [bodytext] => Out of nothing
Nothing became
And how could I have mistaken
this for the real thing?

Goodbye to everything that never was
Goodbye to nothing that always was
Goodbye to five years of my life//
Say goodbye to 5 years "Psyco Wife"
Goodbye to husband never there
Goodbye to memories never shared.

Goodbye to sacrifices to great to make
Goodbye to vows so easy to break
Goodbye to Mother of your child
Goodbye to Lee Baby who drove me wild.
Goodbye to tomorrow that will never be
Goodbye to the LOVE Lee that you found in me.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 419 [topic] => 22 [informant] => PRECIOUSBECKY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

NOTHING

Contributed by PRECIOUSBECKY on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 03:43:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Out of nothing
Nothing became
And how could I have mistaken
this for the real thing?

Goodbye to everything that never was
Goodbye to nothing that always was
Goodbye to five years of my life//
Say goodbye to 5 years "Psyco Wife"
Goodbye to husband never there
Goodbye to memories never shared.

Goodbye to sacrifices to great to make
Goodbye to vows so easy to break
Goodbye to Mother of your child
Goodbye to Lee Baby who drove me wild.
Goodbye to tomorrow that will never be
Goodbye to the LOVE Lee that you found in me.

Copyright © PRECIOUSBECKY ... [ 2006-11-30 15:43:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: NOTHING (User Rating: 1 )
by saj on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 04:11:09 PM AEST
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oh good bye to all those that made us suffer ..."and got away with it :P ":) ...i liked it alot got me angry with u as i related to it and started screaming along goodbye! ...

Re: NOTHING (User Rating: 1 )
by R0b on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 04:32:24 PM AEST
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Hey thanks for commenting my poem, thought Id return the favor. I really like how you wrote this poem, like the repition of saying goodbye at the beginning, I really like it. I also like your other poems as well.

Rob

Re: NOTHING (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 02:49:26 PM AEST
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never read this before becky...so sad...but endings are always the beginning of something new...i can feel your pain through these words...

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