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Array ( [sid] => 128926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ghost [time] => 2006-12-01 15:50:38 [hometext] => a friend told me to write a happy poem, this is what i came up with [bodytext] => I'm not sure what I should do
When I'm with you

You blocked me out
Then I started to shout
I tried to break down the door
While you were laying on the bedroom floor

I thought you just hated me
But I guess we weren't meant to be
I saw you drowning in your blood
Like the red sea's tragic flood

I tried to bring you back to life
But you already ended it with your knife

Your parting words were I love you
I gasped in shock
While you said love me too?
An' my heart started to lock

My life shut down
All I had was a frown
I yelled out I love you
The wind called out, me too

Now leading my life without you
At least we know our love was true
Though it tragiclly died
We still have our pride

No matter what I'll still love
Even though you're above
Though you're dead
You'll always be in my head

I'm not sure what I should do
When I'm with you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 8 [informant] => Amicus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )

Ghost

Contributed by Amicus on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 03:50:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

I'm not sure what I should do
When I'm with you

You blocked me out
Then I started to shout
I tried to break down the door
While you were laying on the bedroom floor

I thought you just hated me
But I guess we weren't meant to be
I saw you drowning in your blood
Like the red sea's tragic flood

I tried to bring you back to life
But you already ended it with your knife

Your parting words were I love you
I gasped in shock
While you said love me too?
An' my heart started to lock

My life shut down
All I had was a frown
I yelled out I love you
The wind called out, me too

Now leading my life without you
At least we know our love was true
Though it tragiclly died
We still have our pride

No matter what I'll still love
Even though you're above
Though you're dead
You'll always be in my head

I'm not sure what I should do
When I'm with you

Copyright © Amicus ... [ 2006-12-01 15:50:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by tearstained_soul on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 03:58:25 PM AEST
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i dont see how it's a happy poem but it's good nevertheless. keep rockin'!

Re: Ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_in_the_darkness09 on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 07:20:15 PM AEST
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yeah, i don't see how it is happy either, but i loved it......i felt like an amazing feeling (in a sad way) inside me.

thank you for sharing it, i enjoyed it alot.

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