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Damn, I Think Too Much
Contributed by
Channing
on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 04:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Im thinking blue
Of a bright blue sky
Where birds fly freely,
A sapphire sea
Free from the worlds pollution
Where the waves crash
Sparkling under the brilliant sun
Cleansing corruption from ones body
Maybe Im thinking green
Of a lush green forest
Filled with sounds of life
The color of a healthy world
Unscathed by mans touch,
No, Im thinking red
Of a red rose
The symbol of love
Of a heart beating quicker
From the taste of ruby lips
Pulsing the blood through veins
Making one feel truly alive
Actually, to be honest,
Im thinking of the greatest thing that exists
Im thinking of you
And how you make me feel
Like a bird in the sky
How you cleanse my corruption
Like the sparkling sea
How you fill my ears with the sound of life
Like the unscathed forests
But mostly I think of how
Youre my red rose, my love,
And how the touch of your lips
Speeds up my heart
Making me feel truly alive
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2006-12-02 16:01:12]
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Re: Damn, I Think Too Much
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by saj on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 06:24:04 PM AEST
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aww that was sooooo sweet:)...beautiful write:)
keep it up...
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Re: Damn, I Think Too Much
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by saj on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 06:27:04 PM AEST
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aww that was sooooo sweet:)...beautiful write:)
keep it up...
saj |
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Re: Damn, I Think Too Much
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by saj on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 06:27:06 PM AEST
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aww that was sooooo sweet:)...beautiful write:)
keep it up...
saj |
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Re: Damn, I Think Too Much
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by saj on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 06:30:06 PM AEST
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aww that was sooooo sweet:)...beautiful write:)
keep it up...
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Re: Damn, I Think Too Much
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by shelby on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:10:42 PM AEST
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Swept me away with this one, nicely done.
Made me feel happy and at peace.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Damn, I Think Too Much
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:32:39 PM AEST
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well written
its a nice poem that i am going to read again
catz :) |
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Re: Damn, I Think Too Much
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by doug on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 05:45:40 PM AEST
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The way this was put together and executed
is excellent. You seemed very deliberate in
the way you pushed eached thought into my
mind and quite clever how you started off with
a color to set the mood of each one. The way
you brought it all together was great and seemed say that this person was everything
in the world to you. Great description and
perfectly done. Truly , Doug |
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