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Array ( [sid] => 128958 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dream [time] => 2006-12-02 23:00:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => someday when the buldings crawl into civilazation
and the moon begs for night
we will create a new nation
when birds would die for flight

one full of hope and wonder
one with all the answers
so there are no questions to ponder
and we sleep on the toes of dancers

we will call our land dream
and everything just is
where minds sing
and we beg for death's somber kiss

this land is not fake not one bit
and i have one more thing to say
there is nother like it
so will you go or will you stay
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 14 [informant] => blindchoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
dream

Contributed by blindchoice on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:00:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



someday when the buldings crawl into civilazation
and the moon begs for night
we will create a new nation
when birds would die for flight

one full of hope and wonder
one with all the answers
so there are no questions to ponder
and we sleep on the toes of dancers

we will call our land dream
and everything just is
where minds sing
and we beg for death's somber kiss

this land is not fake not one bit
and i have one more thing to say
there is nother like it
so will you go or will you stay




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Re: dream (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:49:09 PM AEST
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nicely written, and what a dream good write


Re: dream (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 01:28:15 AM AEST
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You captured my heart w/ your poem for, " Brother Bryce " but, w/ this one you've officially won my fanship!!!Good job!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe


Re: dream (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 02:19:46 AM AEST
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an incredibly beautifull write.
It reaches out and grabs the reader.
What I find fasinating is living on Planet Earth in the Phycical body but living in the spirit.
See I came from a Protastent back ground and years back this little lady kept talkin 'bout heaven. Soon she passed on. I realized I had heard her say the same from an infant. She was a very sweet lady but in her death I saw that she spent so much time yearning for heaven that she didn't take time to live.
I no longer do religon but I'm totally into God! No doubt of that.
Luv, (God) is a thing we should all be. If my spirit is eternal then I have nothing to fear here. Heaven is constently open to me.
Great writing and you've written a beauty here.
Sorry you just inspired me and well ya know, we writers write.
Hugg, luv, joy, peace to you-n-yours,
emy


Re: dream (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 11:55:19 PM AEST
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nicely done. i loved it....you say we will call it dream? ....*looks apon the land of dream, and steps forward.* ....i will stay... wonderfull write..lol.




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