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The Hawk King
Contributed by
yangdantien
on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 03:05:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Only at times can he blink
vision constant
this Shakespeare of Physics
one lid may lift quietly
image entered,
processed
by abstract genius;
rushes down through the tensed
falsely arrested muscles,
his energy eddies in pools
blocks reroute
to his crown palace
where variables dance
unveiling one conclusion:
'Go out
Seed the Stars
start with the moon.'
His heart beats a life
in wonder filled notions
made reproducible.
Can ye divine
given wings and
every advance in medicine
perched the Hawk King
may glide passed
an 11 yr old in the city
on the blocks corner
in the shadows
working a package
and pounce
as a raptor of character
and heal shorty hard rock
and this need for
rock slinging cowboy-ism.
Rather to be on track for Mars
as the God of War must transcend
the affairs of men
especially as an
Inconvenient Truth is presents
we All will be One, once again.
Mother earth beckons
change is pending.
Quantum cosmology proposes
on the dusty wings of the Hawk King
a reason albeit the first truly Non-theistic,
namely, that the universe exists
because of an unconditional
probability based on functionality of nature.
The strings and waves of the cosmos
are inconsistent with the theist
who hacks at the tongue
of growth and change with spin.
Proclaim it in liberty for all
Be Not Afraid
wisdom has to one day render War
as obsolete.
The lack perhaps shame
of not knowing what lies beyond
all the convictions of faith
and its behavoirs will replaced
by embracing what we do know.
As the Hawk Kings Eye is Fixed:
We must get to the stars quick.
Work the answers we have
that everyone can share
theory mathematics
physics and tech
becomes
our new dinner table
and we know
its best to avoid
certain discussions while eating
save them for the drawing room
when we multiplied and made
fruitful the many places
to hawk our ways.
AJPIII
Copyright ©
yangdantien
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2006-12-03 03:05:01]
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Re: The Hawk King
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by shelby on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 03:41:18 AM AEST
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I again am at a loss for words. Brilliant does not even do this justice darn it. I will search the realms of the universe to come up with something fitting just for you.* smiles*
Bravo!!!!!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: The Hawk King
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 04:00:58 AM AEST
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I actually felt the heightened exhilaration in the vibrational content of the universe as I read this & it felt sooo good. I'm floored, I'm speechless, I'm...I'm...ready for a smoke...DAMN! Oops, can I say that?
Love~Me
(((Hey,you guys I want in on this one!))) |
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Re: The Hawk King
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 06:17:54 PM AEST
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I humbly bow before you my dear fellow poet~
A brilliant masterpiece beautifully ascribed through the magic of your pen dearest AJ~
The heights and levels your poem takes the reader is amazing. The freedom to soar the skies and see beyond the horizon. Simply mind blowing and breath taking. You never cease to amaze me my dear friend.
Well done AJ~ captivating and well written as always.
much love from ur fan/friend,
Sue the Infinite Dreamer~ |
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Re: The Hawk King
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 01:07:17 PM AEST
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When I first read this and tried to comment I got that damned "Internal Server Error" thing. After recieving your PM, I now have an advantage. Mr. Hawking...what a facinating little man. Your writes seem to come from another dimension as I suppose they do. To open the head, man...what a wonderful experience.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: The Hawk King
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 06:17:44 PM AEST
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I get it now
you're like some unknown
Lost Prophet.....
well we know who you are now. |
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Re: The Hawk King
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 11:47:30 AM AEST
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Some cultures believe the hawk is a messenger from the high power and the spirit world...I have watched the hawks fly above the zoo in my city...This is an exhilerating write
NS |
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Re: The Hawk King
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by NDean on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 12:52:34 PM AEST
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Loved reading this. Had a sense of metaphorical uncertainty to it, as though the universe has so much more to offer. Could only be me! :)
Anyway
Brilliant.
I will read more
Nathan |
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