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don't know why
about to release
the hate inside

for so long
i was happy with life
but the old me is back
and the new me has died

no one can speak a word
to calm my rage
no one can shut
the door to its cage

reborn is the demon
he's vanquished the saint
he's now controlling
this body of hate [comments] => 2 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 6 [informant] => tin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

reborn is the demon

Contributed by tin on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 10:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

about to lose it
don't know why
about to release
the hate inside

for so long
i was happy with life
but the old me is back
and the new me has died

no one can speak a word
to calm my rage
no one can shut
the door to its cage

reborn is the demon
he's vanquished the saint
he's now controlling
this body of hate

Copyright © tin ... [ 2006-12-03 22:02:29]
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Re: reborn is the demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 10:47:13 PM AEST
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The flow and rhyme are superb. A dark write, it kind of reminds me of ones struggle with depression. How one tries so hard to supress the inner demon from taking control~ You have done a fine job with this write well done and thanks so much for posting it.
warm hugs,
Dreamer~

Re: reborn is the demon (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 02:15:01 PM AEST
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The Demon in us is always lurking...watching....and waiting.

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