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Array ( [sid] => 129089 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => angel [time] => 2006-12-05 23:50:52 [hometext] => just something i whipped up hope you like it [bodytext] => I thought you were my angel
Sent down from heavens sky
I thanked god for your presence
But now I wonder why.]

You took your bow and arrow
And aimed it at my heart
You let it rip right through my soul
And left me torn apart.

You made me wonder what went wrong
I loved you without fail
But I figured out above all else
Your just a typical male. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 54 [informant] => becca_au85 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

angel

Contributed by becca_au85 on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 11:50:52 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

I thought you were my angel
Sent down from heavens sky
I thanked god for your presence
But now I wonder why.]

You took your bow and arrow
And aimed it at my heart
You let it rip right through my soul
And left me torn apart.

You made me wonder what went wrong
I loved you without fail
But I figured out above all else
Your just a typical male.

Copyright © becca_au85 ... [ 2006-12-05 23:50:52]
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Re: angel (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:45:21 AM AEST
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very expressive and powerful.. i enjoyed this piece alot.. there are alot of jerks out there.. we all end up with some of them for awhile. it helps us know what we don't want in a person.. everyone can relate to this at points in their life.. i love the flow of this too and especially the beginning and the end.. thanks for sharing. great job

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