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Array ( [sid] => 12909 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Silence Weighs So Heavy [time] => 2003-02-18 22:00:00 [hometext] => For Dean. If only the words I want to say would just come out the way they sound in my head! [bodytext] => I trust you
But I don't always believe what you say
I need you
But sometimes I wish you'd just go away
I love you
But somehow I can't tell you how I feel

I should just open my mouth and let the words come out
But every time the moment feels right
You tell me again you love me
And I can't make a sound
You stole the moment
Now it's over
I shouldn't feel so confused 'cause I know I've got you
But I can't tell if I'm up or down
You always make me so angry
And then I love you more
I can't stand your ways
But I breathe you

I guess I should tell you that I act this way because I'm so unhappy
I should tell you you're the only thing that makes me happy
Being with you, and thinking about all the plans we've made
Knowing you're the only one that wants the same things I do
I guess I should tell you that I see the worst parts of me all over her
I should tell you I'm scared I'm gonna end up just like her
Because you've always given me everything I wanted
And it's making me hate you every time you tell me no

I trust you
But I can't stand it when she's around you
I need you
But you're always bringing tears to my eyes
I love you
But these words in my head just won't come out

I only want you to hold me tight
I only want you to treat me right
I need you to know how much you mean to me
I need you to know I would die without you
I only want to stay here with you
I only want forever with you
I need you to know that I could fall in love
I need you to know I've never felt this way

I guess I should tell you all these things I'm so terrified to say out loud
I should tell you so maybe I'll just whisper them to you
My hands are shaking, give me a minute to catch my breath
"I love you" can't possibly express everything I feel
I guess I should tell you all of it because my silence weighs so heavy
I should tell you I treasure every second I'm with you
Every little thing you do affects me so deep inside
I need to hide from you because this feeling is too much

Hold me tight
Treat me right
You mean the world to me
I would die without you
Stay here with me
Stay forever
I could fall in love
I've never felt this way [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Silence Weighs So Heavy

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I trust you
But I don't always believe what you say
I need you
But sometimes I wish you'd just go away
I love you
But somehow I can't tell you how I feel

I should just open my mouth and let the words come out
But every time the moment feels right
You tell me again you love me
And I can't make a sound
You stole the moment
Now it's over
I shouldn't feel so confused 'cause I know I've got you
But I can't tell if I'm up or down
You always make me so angry
And then I love you more
I can't stand your ways
But I breathe you

I guess I should tell you that I act this way because I'm so unhappy
I should tell you you're the only thing that makes me happy
Being with you, and thinking about all the plans we've made
Knowing you're the only one that wants the same things I do
I guess I should tell you that I see the worst parts of me all over her
I should tell you I'm scared I'm gonna end up just like her
Because you've always given me everything I wanted
And it's making me hate you every time you tell me no

I trust you
But I can't stand it when she's around you
I need you
But you're always bringing tears to my eyes
I love you
But these words in my head just won't come out

I only want you to hold me tight
I only want you to treat me right
I need you to know how much you mean to me
I need you to know I would die without you
I only want to stay here with you
I only want forever with you
I need you to know that I could fall in love
I need you to know I've never felt this way

I guess I should tell you all these things I'm so terrified to say out loud
I should tell you so maybe I'll just whisper them to you
My hands are shaking, give me a minute to catch my breath
"I love you" can't possibly express everything I feel
I guess I should tell you all of it because my silence weighs so heavy
I should tell you I treasure every second I'm with you
Every little thing you do affects me so deep inside
I need to hide from you because this feeling is too much

Hold me tight
Treat me right
You mean the world to me
I would die without you
Stay here with me
Stay forever
I could fall in love
I've never felt this way




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-02-18 22:00:00]
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Re: Silence Weighs So Heavy (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 01:33:17 AM AEST
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You really hate her, don't you? Well, I don't blame you. I hate her too. Anyway, good poem. I like the contradiction.

Always,
Em


Re: Silence Weighs So Heavy (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 06:39:51 PM AEST
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Wow... great poem beautifully written... wow hopefully this will open his eyes.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Silence Weighs So Heavy (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 09:31:18 PM AEST
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nice write ....

peace be yuor journey

terry




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