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Ecstacy
Contributed by
errious
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Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:34:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The night is harsh
But a set mind is an asset
Sparkling breath contrasts
A deathly black and magical sky
White steam rises from a mouth
And they are unwary
The ground is hard under foot
A pace picks up and a hand reaches
Into a coat pocket which twitches
As a hand clutches the object
It would shine, but tonight
It is dark
Two people meet
They know each other well
But one shows happiness
It is ecstasy
One knows something
One knows how...
A night disperses
Two people on a roadside
But
One lies on their back, staring
He is dead
He did not know
But the other puts his knife back
He did know
Because he is alive
Hair blows in a wind
And one man walks away
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errious
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2006-12-06 11:34:19]
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Re: Ecstacy
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by NDean on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:41:26 AM AEST
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Very good poem.
I really like how the lines interact and.... he he. you know who this is.....
Cool poem anyway.
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