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Array ( [sid] => 12911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fighter Of Your Tears [time] => 2003-02-18 22:40:00 [hometext] => Let's face it, depression sucks. And when a loved one is suffering through it..it seems there are no lengths we won't go to...to try and make them feel some sort of comfort [bodytext] => I would push the boundaries of my love into oblivion
If it would help to ease your troubled weary soul
I would offer myself to the allmighty mercy of evil
If it would cease your endless aching river of tears
I would capture and giftwrap my last breathe for you
If it could only quiet your senseless suffering

I've heard your monsterous screams of anger
I've felt your ever weakening grip
The ache that dwells deep within your being
Is frantically dying to get out
It's threatening to take over and terrorize your mind
We've got to put a leash on it and protect your fragile heart

Let's wipe those rolling tears away
Let's urge your will to fight
We've got to keep your fires surging
And kill it's diabolical yearning to live
We can puncture through your screaming heartache
And let it simply bleed to death

We'll call upon your destined plan
We'll leave it in fates hands
We'll use every single ounce of love
You've kept a prisoner until this day
God willing you'll live out your life
And always will I stand by you and hold your brittle hand [comments] => 9 [counter] => 363 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Lia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Fighter Of Your Tears

Contributed by Lia on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I would push the boundaries of my love into oblivion
If it would help to ease your troubled weary soul
I would offer myself to the allmighty mercy of evil
If it would cease your endless aching river of tears
I would capture and giftwrap my last breathe for you
If it could only quiet your senseless suffering

I've heard your monsterous screams of anger
I've felt your ever weakening grip
The ache that dwells deep within your being
Is frantically dying to get out
It's threatening to take over and terrorize your mind
We've got to put a leash on it and protect your fragile heart

Let's wipe those rolling tears away
Let's urge your will to fight
We've got to keep your fires surging
And kill it's diabolical yearning to live
We can puncture through your screaming heartache
And let it simply bleed to death

We'll call upon your destined plan
We'll leave it in fates hands
We'll use every single ounce of love
You've kept a prisoner until this day
God willing you'll live out your life
And always will I stand by you and hold your brittle hand

Copyright © Lia ... [ 2003-02-18 22:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:06:32 PM AEST
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Lia,What a great friend you are to do this for them,great inspiring peice! Christina

Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:48:57 AM AEST
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this poem is so heartfelt and so full of beauty and passion... i love this poem... and this is such an accurate portrayl of what one can go through when dealing with depression... i have been on both sides... and this is what a true friend thinks and does... blessings to you...

Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:54:18 AM AEST
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You have such a beautiful spirit with noble qualities of human nature.. and you're very caring.. A very good poem. venkat

Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by nebill on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 08:08:48 AM AEST
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Depression won't stand a chance with a friend and support like that. Great read.

Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:27:45 PM AEST
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Very true... very true. It's very hard to see someone go through this agony... harder still when it's yourself. I have seen both... you are a true friend to write such a piece. Great write...

Ginnie

Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 06:52:23 PM AEST
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Lia I havent read many of your poems but this was brilliant I loved this. You capture the moment and the emotions of the moment so well. The last line almost made me cry. Wow keep on writing your talent has no limits.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 11:03:58 PM AEST
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awesome wtire

a true friend sticking through the good and the bad

peace be your journey

terry

Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:38:59 PM AEST
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The commitment, love and sacrifice you show in your desperate attempt to help another gain the strength they need to gain within themselves is quite vividly and longingly painted in the fine piece of work.

Re: Fighter Of Your Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:35:01 PM AEST
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Lia, what a lovely soul your are to feel this persons depression so intensely. This is so warm and beautiful. Dot

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