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In chameleon beauty~

she dances across the sky

Through the graduating hues~

of the returning suns rise...

So ethereal the grace~

of her disappearing mists

Like that of an Angels tear~

by God away kissed...

Aurora, men have named her~

in an age before ours gone

She is womans awakening~

true Goddess of the dawn...

Aurora

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Aurora

Contributed by MisfitMe on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 09:19:13 PM in AEST
Topic: mythology

In chameleon beauty~

she dances across the sky

Through the graduating hues~

of the returning suns rise...

So ethereal the grace~

of her disappearing mists

Like that of an Angels tear~

by God away kissed...

Aurora, men have named her~

in an age before ours gone

She is womans awakening~

true Goddess of the dawn...

Aurora

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Re: Aurora (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 09:56:49 PM AEST
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I am not sure it is intended but as i read this I can see the lightening sheets of the Aurora over the night sky rippling in cosmic dance...A great job of anthropomorphizing The Goddess of Dawn...
I sense it was actually easy for you as your are her Daughter...

PeaceSquared
AJ

Re: Aurora (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_chadow on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 10:58:03 PM AEST
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A dancing lady, a dazzling mist, I see it all. Very good show, mate.

Re: Aurora (User Rating: 1 )
by BSteel on Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 12:16:07 AM AEST
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very visceral and real great flow,
well done,
sincerly,
bsteel

Re: Aurora (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:21:22 AM AEST
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awesome write.. i love it... Hyperion would be proud!

wiz

Re: Aurora (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:07:20 PM AEST
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The imagery in this poem is EXTREMELY well conveyed. I hope to read more of your work.

Eternally Punished,
Faust

Re: Aurora (User Rating: 1 )
by RLSS on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 07:33:21 PM AEST
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Very pretty, great mental imagery of somethng fantastical and, at the same time, balanced with nature.

Re: Aurora (User Rating: 1 )
by queenofcamelot on Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 03:36:09 AM AEST
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this was the first mythology i have ever read i thought it was brilliant i could picture everything you said
bril

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