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Dont Break me
Contributed by
Sturgezulu
on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 12:25:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Mondays came the weekends past
to touch those lips has gone too fast
you are the one beneth my senses,
when fridays here that weeks been too long
to kiss those lips am i so wrong
i fall to sin through all pretenses.
for months on end i breathed alone
you came along my feelings grown
cloaked in temptation i taste air again,
that look of desire i became electric
i wound myself just for your antiseptic
for you consume my old redemption pain.
past tears you cured i still fail to tell
somehow grabbed my hand and raised me from hell
for that i look too you in sweet admiration,
for time your feathered wings were unseen
so beautiful release my skies twist serene
i falter upon you sweet temptation
hold me,kiss me,use me,dont abuse me
for ive been here before,
hold me,kiss me,take me,dont break me
to where ive lived once in its core
a slave to emotion i dream once to much
for one touch of an angel beyond this clutch
i walk upon my clouds this life so far yet painted,
but yet still i fall,i fall into her smile
i pack my bags for from then im gone for a while
i let this heart travel probably tainted
her neon gaze from her eyes
what an entrapment im blind to despise
still it warms my heart with each move,
im a pawn on a foiling board
im a shoe easily laced with reward
for i am your step to improve
but yet ,can you hold me,please can you kiss me,
try not to use me,i cry not to abuse me
for ive been there at that door,
now can you hold me,again can you kiss me,
please can you take me,im weak dont break me
to where ive been broke once before
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Sturgezulu
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2006-12-09 00:25:26]
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Re: Dont Break me
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by BSteel on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 01:18:24 AM AEST
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wow, choppy at parts but highlly emotional
if its is lacking in parts it makes up in sheer
emotion,
thank u,
sincerly,
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Re: Dont Break me
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by Sturgezulu on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 09:09:06 AM AEST
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| Thanks bud,it is very choppy isnt it .I blame beer :s lol |
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Re: Dont Break me
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:10:33 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem alot. The emotion in it you could feel from the beginning. It almost made me cry because it hit home with a past memory.
Keep writing,it cleans the soul.
Kirby |
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Re: Dont Break me
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by Sturgezulu on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 09:15:14 AM AEST
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| Hey glad you enjoyed this,i hope you felt better soon after :) |
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