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Array ( [sid] => 129236 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ocean Gust [time] => 2006-12-10 08:17:42 [hometext] => I got the inspiration for this poem as I listened to Bill Oddie talking about Puffins at the seaside (I get inspiration from some weird places). Also this poem has no real rhyme scheme, in my opinion it gives the poem a strange effect. [bodytext] =>
Pleasant Breeze
Uttered itself around the sea
Being Brisk like any little wind should
To make it pleasing
For the locals
It did anything it could.

It splittered the waves,
In Quiet Awe.
Against Auks and Puffins on the cliff
They Flittered Slightly
Squawking at the wind
Bustling to utmost faze

Kites
Wobbled under invisible force
Within brilliant sun-source
Filtering itself across the lands
In Unknown creatures hands
Across the moors
To further discovery.

Black Crows
Guardians of the Unknown Magic
Are attacked by the Pelagic Winds
Winding itself around
Feathers and Down
Manipulating Ornitho-Gown
As the breeze grew
To a unrelenting gust

Flying across New Realms
Of Wonder
The wind of the sea overwhelms
The Elms of the land
Flicking branches around
From the White Clouds
Metaphorical Army of the elements…

That, my friend, is the way
Of the ocean wind
It builds
And fills the sky
Like a oversized butterfly
Coming from elemental
Cocoon…
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Ocean Gust

Contributed by NDean on Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:17:42 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry




Pleasant Breeze
Uttered itself around the sea
Being Brisk like any little wind should
To make it pleasing
For the locals
It did anything it could.

It splittered the waves,
In Quiet Awe.
Against Auks and Puffins on the cliff
They Flittered Slightly
Squawking at the wind
Bustling to utmost faze

Kites
Wobbled under invisible force
Within brilliant sun-source
Filtering itself across the lands
In Unknown creatures hands
Across the moors
To further discovery.

Black Crows
Guardians of the Unknown Magic
Are attacked by the Pelagic Winds
Winding itself around
Feathers and Down
Manipulating Ornitho-Gown
As the breeze grew
To a unrelenting gust

Flying across New Realms
Of Wonder
The wind of the sea overwhelms
The Elms of the land
Flicking branches around
From the White Clouds
Metaphorical Army of the elements…

That, my friend, is the way
Of the ocean wind
It builds
And fills the sky
Like a oversized butterfly
Coming from elemental
Cocoon…




Copyright © NDean ... [ 2006-12-10 08:17:42]
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Re: Ocean Gust (User Rating: 1 )
by Errious on Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 11:10:14 AM AEST
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Cool poem! Flows well. I like the imagery and emotions that you have created. Well done.

Tom


Re: Ocean Gust (User Rating: 1 )
by epsftbllchic1617 on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 04:57:17 PM AEST
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Thanks for the kind comment.
The last section really sums everything up nicely. I love the title too.




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