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Array ( [sid] => 129267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One More Try [time] => 2006-12-11 03:15:53 [hometext] => about how my boyfriend left me and how I am trying to tell him I have changed and its ok to love and be with the one you love [bodytext] => Loving you is killing me
but at the same time fullfilling me
I try too hard to make you want me
I cry myself to sleep just thinking of what could be
how do u sleep and smile throughtout the day
I try so hard but the pain of not having you is in the way

I want to keep you and make you smile
but where I'm at now my love to you seems futile
I fear of living without you in my life
and living without your love but only with ur strife
I have changed but you don't want to see it
everytime you seem closer your gone in a flit

unconditional love comes from every piece of my broken heart
how is it so easy for you to know forever we could live apart
do you not feel comfortable or warm when I'm near
or do you not hurt when you see my eyes filled with tears
when we touch do you not breath me in as do I for you
when the thought of me being gone forever does it make you blue

do you cringe at the thought of me loving another guy
or how about me not caring for you would you breakdown and cry
would you take me back for the sake of our hearts
or will you play it safe and let us always be apart
will you live wondering if things would have been diverse
or will you keep believing things only would have gotten worse

will you waste your love just because you'r scared
or will you forgive me and make more memories to share
because I'd do it all for you with the blink of an eye
I would love you forever if youd just give me one more try
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One More Try

Contributed by BlueC on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 03:15:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Loving you is killing me
but at the same time fullfilling me
I try too hard to make you want me
I cry myself to sleep just thinking of what could be
how do u sleep and smile throughtout the day
I try so hard but the pain of not having you is in the way

I want to keep you and make you smile
but where I'm at now my love to you seems futile
I fear of living without you in my life
and living without your love but only with ur strife
I have changed but you don't want to see it
everytime you seem closer your gone in a flit

unconditional love comes from every piece of my broken heart
how is it so easy for you to know forever we could live apart
do you not feel comfortable or warm when I'm near
or do you not hurt when you see my eyes filled with tears
when we touch do you not breath me in as do I for you
when the thought of me being gone forever does it make you blue

do you cringe at the thought of me loving another guy
or how about me not caring for you would you breakdown and cry
would you take me back for the sake of our hearts
or will you play it safe and let us always be apart
will you live wondering if things would have been diverse
or will you keep believing things only would have gotten worse

will you waste your love just because you'r scared
or will you forgive me and make more memories to share
because I'd do it all for you with the blink of an eye
I would love you forever if youd just give me one more try




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Re: One More Try (User Rating: 1 )
by Ratwick on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 03:34:46 AM AEST
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I liked your poem Blue C! Normally I wouldn't like that lovey dovey stuff much but right now I wish that my recent ex had wrote that...I hope you two can work it out! All the best! Keep Writing!
Peace


Re: One More Try (User Rating: 1 )
by light_switch on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 04:24:24 AM AEST
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Nice work!
great write.i hope all goes well i ahve been in the same situation.
keep it up
Light_Switch


Re: One More Try (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:34:22 AM AEST
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wow very powerful and sad write.. you should talk to him about getting back and if he don't want to get back with you im sure there is a reason maybe he will keep hurting you in the end.. so be careful and if you guys dont' work it out remember that there is someone better for you out there there is just a proper time for everything..

very good emotional write thanks for sharing

JENNI




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