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shards of broken hearts
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 07:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i was once moved
by the way you smile
live and laugh
but now its all gone
away with the past
and as i step
on shards of broken hearts
scattered on the floor
i scream and cry
and beg for more
more of your torture
more of your pain
give it all to me
to keep me sane
Copyright ©
blindchoice
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2006-12-11 19:32:41]
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Re: shards of broken hearts
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by boredoms_burden on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 07:42:40 PM AEST
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| thats pretty good |
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Re: shards of broken hearts
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 07:47:21 PM AEST
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Wow , a nicely twisted write...this could be a masochists anthem or the confession of a demoness either way it rings the bell soundly.
Good Job!
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: shards of broken hearts
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by chadbrown on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 09:19:15 PM AEST
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| Hits close to home. A little too close. Torture & pain could entail nothing more than spending an afternoon together with this previous lover. It�s metaphorical or allegorical. Good piece. |
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Re: shards of broken hearts
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:08:20 PM AEST
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Chadbrown sums it all up for me~
Short and to the point. You have done a fine job with this. Thanks for posting it and I do hope that things brighten up for you~
warm hugs,
dreamer~ |
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Re: shards of broken hearts
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 06:03:44 PM AEST
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wow very powerful and emotional write.. i like this piece alot.. thanks for sharing
JENNI |
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