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Walk aways and leave you in shadows
To save myself; is to lose myself
If you jump I will jump with you
Hands clasped, without regrets
To make a bed of our watery grave
I would be married by death
In the cold and deep
Then see the warmth of a day
Without you in it, here by my side
Without you in it
There is no life I would carve myself
If I could not whiddle you a place within it
Without you there is no reason to breathe
Without you I wouldnt exist

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Common Sence is Frequently Questionable

Contributed by Love_love_kyo on Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 12:40:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Without You I Wouldnt Exist
Walk aways and leave you in shadows
To save myself; is to lose myself
If you jump I will jump with you
Hands clasped, without regrets
To make a bed of our watery grave
I would be married by death
In the cold and deep
Then see the warmth of a day
Without you in it, here by my side
Without you in it
There is no life I would carve myself
If I could not whiddle you a place within it
Without you there is no reason to breathe
Without you I wouldnt exist

Copyright © Love_love_kyo ... [ 2006-12-12 00:40:09]
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Re: Common Sence is Frequently Questionable (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 06:57:08 PM AEST
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You're right - love makes ppl stupid!
Hell, I know I'm a love fool. However, I've come to the conclusion that life wouldn't be worth living if there wasn't enducers of such volatile emotions.
Over this year, I let go of the love of my life and even 6 months I was saying that 'she was the one' - no-one (and I met a lot of people) seemed to enrich me like she did.
Strange world huh?
Anyway, I really like this piece and I completely know what you mean. There's a lot of good explanation and good use of words; I esp. like,
"There is no life I would carve myself
If I could not whiddle you a place within it"
Great write!

- Tim

Re: Common Sence is Frequently Questionable (User Rating: 1 )
by ClayMan on Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 06:26:23 AM AEST
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So true hey, love makes us blind and can cause us to react most harshly! Well written

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