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Array ( [sid] => 129312 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY TERMS [time] => 2006-12-12 10:44:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => MY TERMS

cut me,
stab me,
shoot me,
drown me,
burn me,
bleed me,
freeze me,
hit me,
torture me,
save me,
trust me,
hate me,
fear me,
and even cry for me if you must.
All these thing I offer for you so you can choose any you like. There is only one thin I never want and that one thing is to never love me. Your love is empty towards me and I cannot feel what you feel and I can not want you the way you want me. This is the end this is where it stops and doesn’t continue. For as soon as you say those words "I love you" I am lost and gone from you for eternity and I shall never return, so forgive me but those are my terms when it come to what you want with me and all I am and wish to be is your friend and nothing more nor more
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Flare_For_Despair [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

MY TERMS

Contributed by Flare_For_Despair on Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 10:44:15 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

MY TERMS

cut me,
stab me,
shoot me,
drown me,
burn me,
bleed me,
freeze me,
hit me,
torture me,
save me,
trust me,
hate me,
fear me,
and even cry for me if you must.
All these thing I offer for you so you can choose any you like. There is only one thin I never want and that one thing is to never love me. Your love is empty towards me and I cannot feel what you feel and I can not want you the way you want me. This is the end this is where it stops and doesn’t continue. For as soon as you say those words "I love you" I am lost and gone from you for eternity and I shall never return, so forgive me but those are my terms when it come to what you want with me and all I am and wish to be is your friend and nothing more nor more

Copyright Â© Flare_For_Despair ... [ 2006-12-12 10:44:15]
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Re: MY TERMS (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 04:24:58 PM AEST
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wow i like the flow of this piece and itsvery powerful.. sounds like you need to talk to someone .. if that is what this is about.. maybe they don't know that ya know.. awesome job in expression though

JENNI

Re: MY TERMS (User Rating: 1 )
by ClayMan on Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 08:36:45 AM AEST
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Terrific! A great explanation of how i feel inside at times, brilliantly put.

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